|Reviews for A Lesson in Fate
| twi nana chapter 11 . 4/14/2011
Ok Miss Lillie, did you GO to Ohio State, or live in Columbus, cause you got the flavor of football games around here just right. Well, acutally you downplayed it a little, but only someone who lives here would know that...this story is really making me smile,,,,,
| XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 44 . 4/13/2011
OK, so I really like this story but it is not as good as the first one. Honestly I am not sure if I am going to be able to read the third one because I think that Bella and Jasper would have made a better couple. I will deffinitly try though, because you are a good writer.
| twi nana chapter 5 . 4/13/2011
OMG funny, and so true...I can just see them taking off down Riverside Drive, and yes, there are a few places to do the deed. Wink Wink
| twi nana chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Hope you are sending the Cullendales to Columbus in the future LOL-Wow hope E realizes that he needs to get out of his own way. Guess I'll see huh...oh and again the referances to the campus make me laugh, and the Wexler Center, ugliest building in Ohio...
| XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 26 . 4/12/2011
Awww Man why does it have to be Fayetteville, NC? It totally should be Fayetteville, AR instead. LOLz
| XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 20 . 4/12/2011
It is just a hot spot for all us small town folk in Norther AR, but since it is close (like 30 minutes close) they should come to Branson, MO. PLEASE?
Now for the review... great chapter and great story so far. There has been a lot (and I mean A LOT) of Drama, and not so much Romance so I hope I see more of that in the future chapters.
| XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 8 . 4/12/2011
WOW! I have been all over the world following the Cullendales tour. Now not only do I get more Cullendale time but sun, sand, and surf. I 3 You really, if it weren't for you they would not be here. LOLz
On a more serious note I know that this story is under Edward/Bella, but Jasper is not going to compleately lose Bella is he, because that would make me really sad. (Of corse I would not mind helping to ease his and my sorrow together if that is what is to happen LOL)
| XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 5 . 4/12/2011
My favorite line of this chapter is... "I love you, Bella, Always and Forever."
What I like about it is the Always and Forever part is kind of ironic, because I have those exact words tattooed on my sholder serwounding the circle part of a Triquetra(the symbol that represents the 'Charmed Ones' in the popular T.V. series "Charmed"). It represents (for me any way) the constant conectivity of my Grandma, my Mom, my Sister, and myself and how we will love each other no mater how far apart our lives may take us. so even though you don't know me, it is real sweet to hear those words (Always And Forever) in context that shows undying love.
| XAngelofMercyX09 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
WOW! Looks like I need to update my passport and hope on a plane to Sydney. Please don't let them leave there until I have seen them! *_* LOLz! Great chapter!
| twi nana chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
great chappie, oh, and since I am from Columbus, every time you mention something about OSU, or the are, makes me smile.
| twi nana chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
Well Edward, see it isn't always about you LOL
| twi nana chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
hmm, this is going to be fun!
| pucina chapter 54 . 4/5/2011
"She's much more powerful than a succubus, Jasper. The Denali sisters have got nothing on Bella." That should have boosted up Bella's confidence. It just broke my heart for Edward. Jasper is so lucky not hearing the thoughts of those around him for the rest of his existence. As jealous as he is, it would not go well.
| pucina chapter 53 . 4/5/2011
At least Bella can be sure that Charlie is not alone. I'm happy for him. Can imagine him blushing. Talking about his love-life isn't exactly his comfort zone.
The change was really sweet - the seduction, the lovemaking and him turning her. Glad that this change were less dramatic than in previous version. This one suites this storyline so much better.
| pucina chapter 52 . 4/5/2011
This really has been tough on Edward. I wish I could get an EPOV. I hope that he's not feeling suicidal this time since Bella is going to stay at arms length. Not that seeing her with his brother makes it any easier on him. But masochism seems to be his thing anyway. I mean, he left in NM so she could get together with Newton! LOL!