Reviews for Here and Now |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you know I was really interested in this story, I had high hopes for it, I'm just happy I checked to make sure it was actually discontinued first to stop the disappointment I would have felt if I'd actually managed to finish time and time again, but hey why finish what you awarded right |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's amazing ! Can't wait for the next chapters ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Discontinued? |
![]() ![]() Bro. I lifted my personal ban on fanfiction and found the last fic and stayed up all night on a work night AND THIS FREAKING FIC HAS BEEN ABANDONED WHY IS FANFICTION LIKE THIS |
![]() ![]() Yo, its been 12 years where tf are the updates |
![]() ![]() Naruto is too wishy washy. Crap story. |
![]() ![]() I started reading this without realizing that this was a sequel to another story you wrote. To be honest, I was super fuckin confused. I'm glad I clicked on the comments and saw the review directed to the first story. However, it's kind of sad that you never updated after chapter 14. I haven't read past the first chapter, but surely there's more, since your previous story contains 44 chapters and all. Anyway, I sincerely hope for your well-being as I continue reading the first story. |
![]() ![]() With the Kurama unsealing I'm pretty sure nothing is going to happen. Like he unsealed Kurama when fighting the the other 7 tailed beast. It would probably feel like getting suddenly dropped into the hot springs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not to be pessimistic, but the author is probably dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() u almost never see naruto get depicted as a scared ninja and u played the plot real well |
![]() ![]() ![]() well fucking done homie u made me scream noooo in my car on the way to work when I got to where you have stopped well done plot I luv what you did with naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sad. Ya know? I forgot the year and was like oh they updated in 2010, that's not too far off. But apparently, it's been 10 years. It's had to have hope you'll update anytime soon or even if ever. Anyways, on the off chance you do, I'll be here waiting and re-reading. Great book-hope to turn the next page soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I couldn't stop reading this story or the one that came before. You write so well and your fight scenes are awesome. The mental anguish that Naruto goes through after being rescued from Orochimaru is so good. I love the way you've written all the characters. All their personalities are spot on and their development is very believable, especially Sasuke's. It shows great character development that Naruto is struggling with whether or not his friends can just be friends and not be manipulated by him. It seems from your author's notes that you may have lost inspiration for finishing this story. I hope you decide to continue it some time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jeez, i just couldnt stop reading. I blazed through the first stroy and just couldnt eat this one up fast enough. I realize its been around 10 years now but i really hope we eventually get to see the conclusion of this banger of a story. |
![]() ![]() Reached chapter 7 and realised there was a first part to this |