|Reviews for Breaking Fate's Rules|
| MurderSassin chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
Second chapter please?
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
You will write more of this, right?
| scorpioneldar chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
mmm i like that image
i would like to see more of this... unique idea for the 5th grail war
but i doubt you will do it
still sexy and oddly in charecter
thank you for your efforts this was sexy and fun
| The Man chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
This was pretty good. I enjoyed it a lot.
| dispassioneight chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
It's a nice lemon, pretty zesty. Sakura is a little OC but not hugely. You could argue for it.
Anyways, er, nice smut? ; It had a good lead up, almost like porn with a plot, lol
| Ashen Author chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Interesting. A somewhat tasteful lemon. It might actually be funny to see a.) how Medea wreaks havoc on Shinji and b.) her taming Rin. Alas.
| Danmaku-OverLord chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS! I Wonder If Rider And Saber Will Appear? And There Will Be Female Gilgamesh? Cause It Would Be A Good Plot Twist. I Also Like The Shirou X Caster X Harem Pairing.
| Takai153 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Nice! I would have liked to see more sex though. Shirou didn't do anything with Sakura other than make out and some oral sex would've been nice too. Still, it was very well written. I hope you write more in the future.
| Zaralann chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Please! I beg you! Post more! Great story and AWESOME IDEA!
| Angry Santo chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
This is pretty fething good. As a one shot or as an opening for a series, it is golden.
I'm not the first to say this, but I feel obligated to add that this is too damn good to just leave as a one shot. keep up the good work
| The-Black-Prince-Thomas chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Please tell me that this is just the start it looks like it would be a very diffent take on the story.
ten out of ten
| dfshie chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
D'awwww... That was so adorable!
| Orchamus chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Hot damn, this is a fav now. I like her game plan, and the sex is nice too.
| Grinja chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I'm a Caster fan, so I like this story. Its a great 1 shot with a good ending, but like another reviewer said, this story begs for a sequel or continuation.
| The Polyethylene Man chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
You should really consider continuing this.