Reviews for Addendum II: Obsession
Atlas Lightyear chapter 12 . 3/30/2009
I love both of these stories! I think that you did an excellent job with both Orange's/Blonde's personalities and I am SO looking forward to a third part. Right? Please?
Stanley Marlowe chapter 12 . 3/22/2009
So how many books are gonna be made out of this Mr. Orange series?

This was pretty good. He's getting closer and closer, and hopefully he gets him soon because at this point, he'll have to turn vigilante to get Vega.
Stanley Marlowe chapter 5 . 3/22/2009
Pretty good so far. But I thought he was going to go after the Asian girl he saw in the last chapter.

Oh well, he'll probably get her next if 'Marilyn' doesn't want a commitment. Based on her character, I doubt it.
Stanley Marlowe chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
This is pretty good. Like how you keep up the characters and the story.

Funny, I'm reading this and I can't stop thinking of what Newendyke would be thinking if he found out the ending of my story.
SASSAFRAS chapter 12 . 3/15/2009
If there's going to be another installment Ican't wait to read it,

your writing is fantastic!

Excellent ending as well.
SASSAFRAS chapter 10 . 2/26/2009
'“I didn’t shoot him because he was dancing to the radio.”'

Great!

However, I thought it was a Zippo, not a match, that Mr Blonde used to (almost) set Marvin on fire, still, very good work.
SASSAFRAS chapter 4 . 1/26/2009
It's wonderful the way you take tiny details from the movies (i.e. Sid) and expand on them to create superb work.

Marilyn, or should I say Susan, is adorable.
SASSAFRAS chapter 3 . 1/19/2009
I love Chapter 3; Criminal Christmas made me giggle.

Great work!