Reviews for Erotica
HowI'vemissedyou chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
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So 'blank' killed 'blank. Fin chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
Ahahahahahahaha! That last sentence was really great!
So 'blank' killed 'blank. Fin chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
Ahahahahahahaha! That last sentence was really great!
HinataStarz chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
um.. how old r they if there doing simple math
mistress akasha chapter 10 . 7/21/2009
GASP! hmm... i wonder how hina-chan is doin in the akatsuki

kisame: well dei loves her

me: haha he loves everyone

deidara: except tobi!

tobi: sensei! *glomps dei*

deidara: get the hell off tobi!

tobi: but tobi loves sensei!

me: aka-chan thinks tobi is cute! *hugs tobi*

tobi: tobi thinks aka-chan is cute too! *hugs back*

kisame: am i not allowed into this hug?

me: i think kisa-kun is cute too! dont you tobi-kun?

tobi: hm... tobi thinks that kisa-kun is cute!

me and tobi: *glomp kisame*

kisame: *thinks* ok im partially happy but now iquestin tobi sexuality!

deidara: *thinks* i knew he was gay! thats why he always hugs me!
Kiyiomi chapter 9 . 7/5/2009
IS CUTE XD
TheNarator chapter 5 . 6/12/2009
WRITE MORE! write and actual lemon this time. write SOMETHING! pwez?
xXsunny-angelXx chapter 5 . 3/13/2009
Great chapter! LOl I hope Sasuke "gets some of that" in later chapters. Well please update soon!) Have a good one!

sunny
hinata2233 chapter 5 . 3/8/2009
i love hinata and her virgin eyes!
Hinakunoichi chapter 4 . 3/5/2009
this story so hot its froze,

but i will be scarred for life from the orochimaru lemon. the guy totally freaks me out so take you for the trip to the therapist. what i am trying to say is that it is a great story i am innocent.

hina
xXsunny-angelXx chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
LoL the ending was hilarious!Well I hope you have a good one!

And please update soon

sunny
hinata2233 chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
OMG! that was so funny:) i like hiashi in this fic;)
vampire dark-angel14 chapter 3 . 2/15/2009
rofl that was fuuny when sasuke asked if this was a fanfic...

your story is pretty nice and sasuke doesn't realli seem to have much luck tho(as long as he didn't get hina-chan...

...oh well update soonim looking forward to more
xXsunny-angelXx chapter 3 . 2/10/2009
i love this chapter!well update soon.)

SUNNY
Dark-Severus-Snape chapter 3 . 2/8/2009
XxSUNNYANGELxX I don't think itachi/hinata is the best pairing but they are close to it. Thelurkerofdoom Ryu is very random as I seen in real life and she an awesome and random person herself lol. Hinata2233: ryu and i hate sasugay with a passion lol. other enjoy reading it lol. later DarkSev
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