Reviews for Kiraabi: Killer Beauty
midnightscar17 chapter 22 . 12/2/2014
midnightscar17 chapter 17 . 12/2/2014
Why are you using japanese terms in a english story
Sensuto chapter 22 . 10/15/2014
The story has an awesome plot development... Please try and finish the story... Really looking forward to it...
Moral Conundrum chapter 4 . 7/4/2014
I'm not too sure how I feel about this chapter.
Lots of stories tilt one way or another concerning Naruto's obliviousness about girls. Either he's completely unconcerned with them and prefers to concentrate on training, or he's the same perverted, drooling, shallow excuse of a boy that all the others are. In stories that follow the first type of attitude, or at least the stories of a Naruto/Sakura pairing, she is the only girl that he actually sees as a girl, thinking she's the only girl who really counts as a girl. I have the feeling that you should have tried to angle the story so that while Naruto would approve of Sakura wanting to be stronger (though thinking she's always been strong), that he would disapprove of the 'glamouring up' she's going through. That way you could have a continuing debate in Sakura's mind between her teacher saying she 'could be beautiful if she tried', and Naruto saying 'she is and always has been beautiful'.
But that's just my thought. I'm a little sad at how many stories keep Naruto as horribly insensitive and socially self-destructive.
Tifah 98 chapter 12 . 2/28/2014
Loving the great WORK ,! just notice that you have more sex scene for kakita than for narusaku and steamier too
Tifah 98 chapter 2 . 2/28/2014
Loving the work but sakura has to sleep around? At least naruto her first!
Tifah 98 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Sssoo Love this first chapter keep it up!
firetemplar415 chapter 22 . 2/25/2014
I do like the story so far specially the empowering message about women. Although...I do not like at all how sakura ' corrects' naruto by striking him...
Guest chapter 22 . 2/18/2014
It would surely throw me for a loop if that child was Minato.

Wow. Jiraya and Tsunade's kid would be amazing. XD

Anyways, awesome story, I love how its turning out.
Justin chapter 22 . 1/13/2014
just say i read the whole thing and throughly enjoyed it it was amazing i hope to read more
Dazz chapter 22 . 1/12/2014
Wow this could be a stand alone Jiraiya/Tsunade story. Would be epic!
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 22 . 1/12/2014
Naruto is the grandchild of tsunade and jiraiya, seen it before. but I will admit that the backstory this time was at least somewhat unique. most people come up with some over generalized story to work the idea in as a convenient plot device to make things simple to write. it's rare to see a unique take on a clich├ęd fanon plot point. good job.
DJKuhns chapter 22 . 1/12/2014
Good story, interesting plot. Keep up the good work. Hopefully you find your muse again.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 22 . 1/9/2014
Wonder who the kid was?
Chibi Vampyre San chapter 22 . 1/9/2014
OH MY GOD YOU'RE BACK! YAY! I've loved this story since I first found it!
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