|Reviews for When|
| Zuvios Gemini chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
This was fantastic. :D
| Smear-Sama chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Awesome story! It has this special Fight Club-aura all over, and i love it. (Y)
| Ringbearingreasergal chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Wow, that was really intense! Good job on the characterization of 'Narrator'. I really liked Tyler's little monologue and the way 'Narrator' responded was brilliant. Great job.
| Moth Gypsy chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
This is one of those things Im going to read over and over again, so Im reviewing now so that I dont feel like an asshole later when I dont. This is so well written that I actually forgot that I was reading a fanwork there at the end. Plus, I guess I can relate to the whole fake emotions thing, which makes it interesting.
| K.H. Ivywater chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
I enjoyed this, particularly the following lines:
"We are now a community of two. We have not reached the level of enlightenment needed to become hermits, but we are too enlightened to be a part of the flock."
Thank you for sharing. :)
| Enid chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
OH WOW that was amazing, stomach-churningly sad and wonderful and sexy at the same time. Write more!