Reviews for Breakdown
Aj 4ever chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I have read all of your stories and they are amazing!
MCR Killjoys chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
i loved it

i think your really good at writing alice/jasper

Becky xxx
candyluvsu chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Another sweet story about my favourite couple :)
readpaintlaugh chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
its hard to find a good Jasper/Alice fic out there but this is one of the good ones! you get their relationship perfectly! i love it! :)
ThatOneQuirkyFangirl chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
I read this while listening to River Flows in you by Yiruma and it was almost perfect! This was a really great story! :D
marsbareater12 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
YOU should write Jaclie again! This is great stuff!
Uja chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Poor Jazz

great fic
CattyGothLoli chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I loved this and the idea. I don't think I've read a fic where Jasper actually has a breakdown in it and Alice is there for him. If I have then I don't remember it, great job with this one-shot!
Liv. The. Night. Writer chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
o. m. g.

that was...

amazing!

seriously, it made me cry...

you are an amazing author

olivia
Authoress of Evil chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
This was soo sad... but so GOOD! Umm, just one thing I don't understand. Isn't it suspicious that they always move when one of them loses it. Wouldn't the people find that odd? I'm surprised they haven't been interviewed about that by the police yet... or maybe they have... (insert lightbulb here.)
BellaMarieNicole chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
I almost cried!

Mainly at the part where he screamed [

I think the words "of a broken man" is what got to me.

You write very descriptive.

It was very well written and emotion filled.

I hope to read more
meg chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
i love it, very believable. please write more of them.
life takes time chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Oh poor Jasper!

How I love him,

This one was really great, captured their relationship to near perfection!
RosaliaMay chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Aww, poor Jasper! That's heartbreaking! Once again you have written an entirely believable and moving story! I loved it! I think you are spot on with your characters- this is exactly how I imagine Jasper would feel and how Alice would react! As you know, I can't wait to read any more fics you write! :)
jasje20 chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
nice story:D
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