|Reviews for Just another hero|
| xPaInFulXiNsAnItYx chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
A very good start...please write more?
And not to be cruel or anything, but could you make it possible to put some separation between paragraphs, please? You know, just to make it easier to read and everything.
But over-all, great start.
| Lara-Van chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I'm going to be completely honest with you. It's not all that great. It's not bad, it's just not phenomenal.
And some separation into paragraphs would be useful, just to make it easier to read. That's all. Decent start.