Reviews for Hold Me Close
Babycub chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
WOW that was really touching. I am so adding this story to mt favorites!
OCDBookNerd chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
omg this is really good, i love the idea and it is so sweet, you captured each character perfectly and it was great :P
SmartA55 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
i will be your best friend if you continue this.
jaz719 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
AWW that was so cute. Continue!
Shadow58 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I think you should definatly make more chapters.
RogueWriter7007 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I think you could turn this into a fairly long story. I don't think it just ends there. It has a great storyline and to make it more interesting you could have like iggy or someone walk in the room.
GleekingSam chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Please continue XD You write really well.
pinkprincess23 chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I think you should continue writing, and make it an actual story, not just a one shot! so cute!
ThePenWielder chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Aw that was so sweet, I loved it!
Fallen Ark Angel chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
that was sp awesome! you should continue. Please?
eclipsed heart chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
aw... they're so cute together... please do continue!

~eh~
kathyklt chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
AW!

Cute!

You should make another chapter were they get caught!

That would be fun!
Piro13 chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
so sweet! (sobs uncontrolably)
DJ Rush chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
it was perdy cute:) it was a lil outa character tho like Max was kinda being a lil bit of a woos about it maybe Fang could be like more involed in getting her to tell him what's wrong instead of Max being all vonerable because she's just a beast like that ;)
Raccchel chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Okay, so I read this on Maximum-X

and I loved it.

So update.
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