|Reviews for Payback|
| Black Raven Feather chapter 1 . 1/30
Are you God?
I think I like this.
| 19jacinta88 chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
Ok they should have at least snogged their brains out! this was so cute!
| d1x1lady chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Fantastic story. Loved it!
| onemoore chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
that was amazingness. it made me all tingly inside.
| kayleigh101 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
this is good
| iLoveRomance2o11 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Hot!;) I really liked this:) Great work!
| Inuyasha-twilight-fang-girl chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Haha that was cute, good job
| HouseElf chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
IDIOT! this needs to be under M. STUPID GIT. I HATE YOUR guts
| mysteriouslife chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
aww wow! sequel?
| Loonynamelass chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Note to self: Do not say "You owe me" without further clarification in business letters ever.
""I get it!" she said quickly, not wanting to add that mental picture to her growing inventory."
"her growing inventory" is a nice way of saying " #$%! I've seen Fred naked! #$%! $# ! !&%*!"
| Mischeif never fully managed chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
-B-AW! SO CUTE!
| Spunkalovely chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
I like it. D
| Ellae chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Aah where's the end!
I. Want. Fred.
Naked as the day he was born. Oh yeah.
Okay, I'll stop my mind-ogle and conclude this review ;D
| Lady Zymurgy chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
awesome. m Fred.
| Joanna chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
will you be adding other chapters? I hope so :D