Reviews for More Time
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
This (really sad, terribly poignant) story sort of reminds me of "Dead Like Me". If you haven't seen that series, it's available on DVD and I highly recommend it.

[frowning] How'd he write the letter? How'd he know he would need to? Did he finally die of sakura? They must have had SOME kind of warning! And if so, then I know Raven would have moved Heaven and Earth to save him.

Lots of unanswered questions...
DarkHairedDreamer chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
So cute and angsty! So im guessing that was a letter written from heaven?
BBsevolEAR chapter 1 . 12/13/2010


GreenRock chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
One of the very few one-shot FF's that I've read that gave me a heavy 'tug-at-your-heartstrings-moment'. Glad I took time to read this. :D
Athwart Black chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Most sad, but nicely written nonetheless :)
Raven'sWinterRaine chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
That was so sad and well put together that I actually cried. Yeah, I'm an overly emotional bitch, but hey. . Great job!
Juleskat101 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
SADNESS! :( BUT i luv it all the same. :)
Pseudonym Jareth chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Bittersweet. The last bit where her eyes 'pop open' were a little iffy for me, but it's okay. The way it is written iswonderful. Nice job, you might wanna consider a sequel.

Wolvmbm chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Aww man, don't tell me that Beast boy is dead. :(

Because that is just a heart breaker right there. ;(

Please keep up the good work on making good stories, even sad ones like this one, for any future readers. ;)