Reviews for Paranoid
LuckyTurtle chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Don't worry, I wasn't bored at the beginning of it! If I was bored, I wouldn't have kept on reading (hehe). The beginning was actually really good-got me hooked on your story till the end!
Novalia1001 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I love Paranoid! It was so simple, so truthful...

And by the way, I have an answer to a rhetorical question. What sort of pervert is he? A lolicon one! Eve is twelve years his junior, seriously!

And dragging her out of the store with her dressed like that? He really is loosing his mind!

Well... lost it while doing "stuff". wink wink, nudge nudge...
Lycara chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
S-So cute ; o ;

I just love your Train/Eve stories~!
Timeless Illusion chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Ahaha, got a nice little laugh :)

Cute! Love how he is so protective of her ;DD
Kats02980416 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
I heart Train and Eve as a couple and I loved how your wrote them future time and Eve being 17. I've always wanted to know how that would be when she turns into that age and yea, your right, Train is like 10 years older than her which would make him 27. Also, throughout time, their feelings for each other probably would have grown and throughout their friendly competition with each other and just missions, somehow the truth would come out. Its like the first one to confess loses or wins. I liked your story and how it all turned out. I could see Eve being naive about love and romance, but at the same time be a little bit more confused on her heart and what she's feeling because she's grown to respect Train as a friend and an excellent fighter, and savior, and a brother, but yea, Im sure Eve also would grow precious to him to be more than just his friend and partner. The story was good. keep on writing.
Ame no Yuki chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I want to see Sven reaction so badly. XD
Niki chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Aww so cute!
DarknessQueen12 chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Hahaha I love it! Your stories are very awesome!
The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Good story I liked it your really good at working with this pairing
TrainxEve-Fan12 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
So...amazingly...cute! I love this! Not abrubt at all! *claps* I'm faving this.
Avedici chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
OMG! Train x Eve story

i LOVE it
Madison chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Haha! Brilliant! Wonderfully written. It was so cute.
Jalyss chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Aw, this was adorable!

Keep writing~ You're really good.

TrainxEve!
XxTrain'sCherryBlossomxX chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Amazing! *Throws Confetti too*

I loved it.. It made me smile soo much! Great Job!
historysoverture chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
that was so cute! great job!
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