|Reviews for Dragged About|
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
This was a nice story.
You did well keeping Ron and Padma in-character. It was funny how Ron ended up dragged everywhere by Padma, in spite of Ron not being a very good date to her.
| JJ Rust chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Not bad. I think you captured Ron's awkwardness well and showed a more take charge side of Padma.
One big thing, though, was you switched between past and present tense quite a bit. Stories should always be kept in one tense.
A couple typos I caught: "she doesn't let shyly he gave her" should be "she doesn't let go. He gave her"
"leaned against him smile playing at her lips" should be "leaned against him, a smile playing at her lips."
Overall, good effort and you managed to tell a complete story in little over 500 words.