|Reviews for My Happy Ending|
| Saki Toyo chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Oh, this is such a cute fic! -
I loved it!
You obviously enjoy using dialogue, and you're very good at it, too! But you might want to take some time to write in more detail - describe the characters' surroundings and their feelings. It'll make it much better!
I also noticed that you repeatedly used "smirk". You could try using different words instead of that, since repeating one word over and over may be a little strange. I like to use a thesaurus to do this.
I hope I didn't sound arrogant. .
All in all, great job!
| qewla chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
wow, that is simple and sweet.
Potential of being a good story if you continue you know.
btw, keep up the good work!
| Kunie chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Wouldn't you consider in making it a lemon?
| jazzmin92 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
nice one ! cant wait for more.