|Reviews for Say What You Mean, Do What You Say|
| elliewind chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
One of my most favorite fan-fictions on this site. Leaves me speechless.
| Roocie chapter 7 . 4/23/2013
Okay I don't really know what to say but this story definately deserved a review! WOW AMAZING! I love the plot, the way you've descriped the characters, the way they act, just everything in this story is SO good! And I wish, god I really wish, that you will write other stories in the future. So yeah. Thank you for an amazing experience :)
| Sidelines chapter 7 . 3/28/2013
FANTASTIC! I don't generally read this genre but this is so superbly done. Held up to the promises of being gritty and real. Hyper real and intense. Completely engrossing, extremely well done.
| Fyoex chapter 7 . 3/16/2013
My god this was amazing. I'll be honest there were times where I wanted to stop reading, but I pushed on, and I'm glad I stayed with it until the end. Thank you for the journey.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
This needs to be a doujinshi! Imeadiately!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
*nosebleed* - ...
| luxartisan chapter 7 . 2/26/2013
Tragic, cathartic and utterly wonderful. I'm speechless and spent. Despite its darkness and different view of these characters, you captured me. I believed *you* and that's what all art does, doesn't it? Takes what we think we know, turns it inside out and says, "this is what it is now," taking us on a journey we might never otherwise experience. And what a long, strange journey it was for this reader and I'm sure, for you as the author. I bow to your greatness and thank you for sharing your remarkable talent.
| RedPineapple27 chapter 7 . 9/12/2012
I've got to say, I nearly stopped reading this so many times - it was a little too abusive for my tastes. But I loved this epilogue to bits. Any roads, just letting you know.
| willowillow chapter 7 . 7/31/2012
shit i love the epilogue. i'm glad i found this :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/8/2012
Perfect. The best story I've ever read.
| spinninground chapter 7 . 7/4/2012
I honestly can't handle how good this is. I've read it before, and probably reviewed anonymously, but then lost track of it. Now that I've found this fic again, (after I've read many, many more,) it's clear how rare this is, and I love it. You write with an intensity that makes Kyouya's state of mind feel as frenetic and altered as I feel after staying up all night with my eyes wired open, high-strung on caffeine and, though I've mostly stopped now, way too many cigarettes.
| ladydanni chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
I want to review this well so that my stream of conciousness dose you justice. This story was incredibly dark at some oints and even a bit depressing but i could feel as it was written, that you didnt write to be made that way( if that makes sense). You wrote kyoya honestly
| Moore Thane Woods chapter 7 . 5/6/2012
This fanfic is amazing. I don't know how I can properly critique it so maybe I'll just tell you how I feel then. This is probably gonna be long as fuck but please bear with me.
I read your fic back in 09 when you were still in the process of writing the whole thing, and I know it's ridiculous to only be writing a review now, but I've been coming back to read this fic again and again over the years. I guess it's because I feel that it's been haunting me, the dark emotions you write are so raw and bare (and cause it's kinda hot...haha). But I think what you've captured here is something very unique, it's real, without the usual sugar coating of most angst fics written with a happy ending and yet not completely hopeless in it's outlook.
Your characterizations are another thing I really love. The way you've interpreted the characters is not entirely uncommon, but your presentation of it is first-class. I think I can only pray that I can find another story as well written as this and that clicks so well with what I feel.
I really love your first person narrative, Kyouya's stream-of-consciousness is so real in its dissonance. And I feel many of my own emotions and thought trails reflected in your writing. Which is probably why I feel so drawn to it and I'm sure many of your reader feel the same. (Or at least I should hope so or I'm making myself out to be a freak...)
I really enjoy reading your author's notes too. Knowing what contributed to the production of such a piece is enlightening and well, putting your own opinions out there while writing a piece so conflicting with your own moral position is admirable, both in the sense that you hold fast to your own values and can at the same time distance yourself enough to write something that is so contrasting in its nature.
I'm pretty sure I'm not making too much sense here, but what I'm trying to say is that you're an amazing writer, not just because of your command of english but in your style and thinking which is something that cannot be learnt., which means you have a gift, so never stop using it:)
Thank you so much for this, I hope you never stop writing!
| Zoorzh chapter 7 . 4/7/2012
| TheGreatChickenbone chapter 7 . 3/23/2012
I can't even say what I have felt through this entire thing. I loved it. It was definitely a roller coaster of emotions. It's very different than anything I have ever read before