Reviews for Choice and Consequences
jk chapter 4 . 10/17/2015
damn I didn't realize this was a bellas a virgin and Edwards a whore story...NO THANKS
jk chapter 29 . 6/24/2015
we never got to read about the denali complications!
jk chapter 26 . 6/24/2015
what the fuck was that bullshit? Edward just stands there and watches bella drink from some dude? then instead of letting him turn Edward tells her to fucking kill him then she freaks says she cant so he breaks the guy neck? wtf? why not let him change? isn't that better then dying? and now their bonding over this bullshit...fuck that...I hate this edwrd
jk chapter 25 . 6/24/2015
I had pushed him away...who gives a flying fuck? this Edward sucks balls
jk chapter 23 . 6/24/2015
I really don't want to hear about all the girls edwad was with...errr
jk chapter 15 . 6/24/2015
im guessing that was supposed to be hot...the bathroom scene...and it could have been if it wasn't so wrong...wrong time...it was too soon and tell me how di bella not know someone was in the shower? super vamp hearing and all? and then she sees Edward and he smirks at her? like hes fucking gods gift to women o something...fuck I hate cocky assward!

and those complications in denali are the whores right? meaning hes been with one or all of them? now I just hate him more...I didn't know that was possible
jk chapter 8 . 6/24/2015
why in the hell would he have a house for them already? its his house right but hes just saying its thiers
and what was that whole you don't know how long ive waited for you crap? he didn't wait...or at least he waited insid other women...creep
jk chapter 7 . 6/24/2015
ya bella and jasper!
Edwards a arrogant little prick he can go fuck himself...
jk chapter 5 . 6/24/2015
he says im her first and I want to be her only...so he gets a virgin and what does bella get? a skank?
jk chapter 4 . 6/24/2015
Edwards been with humans before?/ oh hell no...im out fuck that
jk chapter 3 . 6/23/2015
Edward sure was quick to take her to bed! Makes me think he does this often! I couldn't help but notice when he said this is your first time he sure didn't return the sentiment so he isn't a virgin?
is he a whore? I really hope hes not!
if he is I don't want him anywhere near bella!
and whats that I love you bullshit? bella desnt love him how could she? she doesn't fucking know him!
jk chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
does bella have to be so pathetic? seriously? shes fucking creepy
1853kaz chapter 29 . 9/10/2014
Enjoyed it very much! Thank you :)
1853kaz chapter 19 . 9/10/2014
Oo, tread lightly, Edward. Charlie has cop radar, grieved or not! :)
1853kaz chapter 9 . 9/8/2014
Great chapter! Liked all the hunting analogies. And Bella's bad mood - totally understandable :)
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