|Reviews for Storms|
| Sukiethree chapter 30 . 2/5
Really loved your story. A different take and a tree just end. I just knew she would pick Edward but not "get rid" of the baby. I gave you on alert and really hope we get the epilogue one day.
| Arigato210 chapter 8 . 4/1/2013
Hello Arigato here,
I just picked up your story, love it thus far. I was planning to read til the end then comment since I hate reviewing mid-way thorugh a story. But I gotta say Rose is being EXTREMELY BITCHING, I sooo hope she gets her and Emment needs to stop being a door mat and say something. He actually likes Bella and Rose keeps saying she doesn't want this life, well that includes Emmet too, does he realize that? I SOOOOOO hope someone gets her tells her off, soemone needs to tell her off for once, instead of indulging the spoiled princess act. Edward being a senoir of the group has more right to be in this family than she does, especially, if she keeps going on about how she doesn't wants this life. If Rose really doesnt want to be a Cullen I say let Edward kill her, (but dont really).
GREAT CHAPTER I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
P.S I like the poem/chapter title thing you have going on
| DracoDreams-2 chapter 30 . 1/11/2012
pretty good story keep up the good work
| divyvicki chapter 30 . 10/9/2011
I'm not quite sure what to think of this story. Hard to believe you are only 13. I found it somewhat wordy sometimes and very depressing. Are you finished now or do you have one last chapter to comeplete?
| divyvicki chapter 17 . 10/9/2011
Can you tell me what the term Jumper means. In the US it is a dress that goes over a blouse, but I don't think that is what you are referring to in the story. Doesn't really matter, just wondered.
| divyvicki chapter 16 . 10/9/2011
Thank God for Edward. Once again he saved Bella. Hope she gets her act together.
| divyvicki chapter 14 . 10/9/2011
This is so tragic. Sure hoping for a HEA.
| divyvicki chapter 10 . 10/8/2011
Jake said he's not stupid but he's pretty oblivious if he can't tell how depressed Bella is. He's more Ida jerk than Edward
| divyvicki chapter 8 . 10/8/2011
Boy they r more screwed up here than in New Moon
| divyvicki chapter 7 . 10/8/2011
This just keeps getting sadder and sadder.
| divyvicki chapter 6 . 10/8/2011
How long is Bella going to keep lying to herself
| divyvicki chapter 4 . 10/8/2011
Stil hoping for an Edward Bella HEA. Interested to see how urging to fix this mess
| divyvicki chapter 3 . 10/8/2011
I just started this. Looks interesting. Hoping for a HEA for Edward and Bella as this is a Edward and Bella story. Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out.
| Twiolic chapter 30 . 9/1/2011
Good decision by Bella. With a little $ help from the Cullens baby Black and Jake will be just fine.
Great way to end an outstanding and wonderful story. Now pleeeze hurry along with the epilogue.
| Twiolic chapter 27 . 9/1/2011
Surely you are going to give these three tortured, plus one innocent, souls a HEA.