|Reviews for Mercy of the Elements|
| sevslave1 chapter 1 . 5/16
| ExAmoreDolorem chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Is there a sequel? I want more...
| BellaTallin chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
'Sigh'. Beautiful, tragic, gripping sadness and hope breaking through fear. This particular line -
"You spent a lifetime mourning for a lost love, and committed to a role that was necessary—yes, I know that it was—but still, who you were, the relationships you formed, they were all light and shadow, as impermanent as ice—"
-creates such a vivid image, startling in its' clarity and as substantial as smoke. '..all light and shadow, as impermanent as ice..' Beautiful. Again, and if mostly for this one, well done.
| Vis Vires chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
TBC? I hope so - it works as a one-shot, but it would be awesome to get more! I am quite impressed with your ability to utilize written words to create a scene - your descriptions are nothing short of beautiful!
| MistressBlackSnape chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
this was a great intro. did these characters stop speaking to you? Cuz I'd love it if they spoke some more to me. ;-)
| Lia Felix chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
This is going good so far. Keep it up, can't wait to see what else you have in store!
| Paganwildcat chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
aw... a sad snape. This works well as a one-shot... though I will not be complaining if it continues. ;-)