Reviews for Love Fest
Oshey9 chapter 4 . 11/27/2011
This was... Utterly gross and perverted... And i couldn't stop laughing at their ridiculous behaviour! XD
OMG chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
That was incredibly DISTURBING!
kumagorox3 chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
haha i loved edward's reaction when alice took out the pumps :)
kumagorox3 chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
wahoo! screw bella!
kumagorox3 chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
LOL I loved the part when Jacob hit her on the head with a rock. :) This is AWESOME!
bookworm0313 chapter 2 . 3/21/2010
OMG, when did this ever pop in your head? Where did this happen. That is so... ugh! I can not se that. I have to admit, it's pretty funny though. I'm curious. More please?
hope and fate chapter 4 . 3/15/2010
Please write more, and are you keeping the lingerie? hope&fate xx
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2010

this was just SO FUNNY to me!

I'm really sorryif that's not what youwere going for. D:

But it is so like nightlight with a gay twist! That's exactly what came to my mind!

lol... I liked it n_n
Smash Bandiicoot chapter 4 . 2/18/2010
To god.
BexRex chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I laughed right out loud! Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more!
shunsuke.sensei chapter 4 . 2/16/2010
U_U delaying the unevitable... anyway, I really like the way Jacob threw a stone on Bella although I know Edward would never act 'flamboyantly' as in the previous chapter. It just cannot work...personally speaking. BUT I really like the lingerie idea xD
Smash Bandiicoot chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
Make this number one priority.
Smash Bandiicoot chapter 2 . 2/13/2010
No, don't continue. It's horrible.
Smash Bandiicoot chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Wow, you're an idiot.
GABE chapter 3 . 1/4/2010
As odd as i feel reading it i want to know what comes next
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