|Reviews for Protector|
| Rose chapter 1 . 4/16
Why do all stories with abuse have her and Edward fall in love so quickly? Hell, I'm the canon they didn't fall this quickly. I love after one day? Fuck out of here. Done with this story.
| i can't believe chapter 28 . 2/8
This bullshit. None of the asslicking mutts deserve to be forgiven and should have been destroyed. They are nothing more than wife beating abusive mother fuckers. They attacked without provocation. According to the treaty the cullens have a right to kill the wolves.
| Indigo76 chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
These are the weakest vamps I have ever read about. I like your story but come on, it's all over the place. Jake beats Bella and when Edward and Charlie find out they don't kill him? They do nothing but say it'll be ok. The way it's written it's like the vamps are afraid of the wolves. Smh. Then Leah snatch vamp Bella out the house full of vamps and not one of them follow them? They just left her out there alone and stayed at the house. I've never wanted to hop in a story and beat the hell out of the characters so bad. Lmao. But like I said I do like your story and my comment is not to be mean or upset anybody.
| Twilightfanatic85 chapter 28 . 12/6/2012
Great story! Cant wait for another story!
| hasmik12 chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
OMG! this is a realy cool story
| darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
keep up the good work on your stories
| E.Cullen1901 chapter 28 . 6/11/2011
amazing story! the beginning was a little confusing but it got a lot better over the chapters:) i loved it!
| AlexRodriguez chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
hi my name is alex rodriguez and i just started reading ur story and and i love it so far, but im just a little confused is edward a vampire or is he human?
| Miss G Lovett chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
| vamplover14 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
wow it is really good like all of ur storys
| earthangel678 chapter 28 . 11/9/2009
wow, what a story, laugh, cry, hurt, get all hot, and bothered
Thanks for sharing!
| ajendas chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
Collar Idea? I think you mean CALLER ID...wow...you really need more than spellcheck.
What would be the harm of telling her father/Edward about Jacob. He'd just get put in jail and leave her alone. It may be a made up story but it's set in USA and there are laws that protect people from stuff like this happening over and over.
| JUST CALL ME ALICE chapter 28 . 8/14/2009
TAT WAS A SAD STORY I LOVEED IT BEST STORY I READ SO FAR
| JUST CALL ME ALICE chapter 27 . 8/14/2009
DONT LET BELLA DIE (SNIFF)
| JUST CALL ME ALICE chapter 26 . 8/14/2009
YEAH THOSE ASSHOLE WEREWOLFES GOT IT COMING 2 THEM NOW