|Reviews for Geometry|
| Suzanne chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Lines, circles... I loved that different style.
Again, good expressions like e.g.
"Piece by piece, bit by obstinate bit she collected him, and began creating her own personal picture, much like she did every day at work."
| BandBfan chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Well, that was just absolutely beautiful, what an amazing artist you are with words. I like seeing Booth's POV on The Line
| BBSHIPPER1 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
No actual dialogue but so much said! I liked the stream of conciousness approach. I also liked that Bones picked up some Booth 'ammo' ... I loved your pithy smart, sometimes snarky Booth dialogue. I enjoyed this one ... Even though it was a new style it wad still definitively you... I think what stays the same is your handle on the characters
| cmf227 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
This was stunningly beautiful. Like everything else you write, apparently. I love the concept, and I think you excelled with your take on it. So very beautiful. I'm probably going to read ALL of your fics now. Be prepared.
| blaineanderson chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I really don't know how I missed this, so I apologize for never leaving you a review :(.
"Feeling like a human version of Twister, he strode into her office, hoping to put his feet on all the right colors. Spin good, and you win. Spin bad, and you wind up in a painful heap on the floor, wondering why you’d put your hand just there."
You're attention to detail is so riveting. I particularly liked the little treasures in your piece like the quote above as well as “had become illiterate in the space of a heartbeat.” and “did a cannonball over the edge.” but at the same time, the piece as a whole, was just oh so... *sighs in adoration*
| Ashley055 chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Yes, it's me again. I've been spending my time that SHOULD be dedicated to studying reading all of your fics. So PS - should I fail anything, please know that it is your fault. Moving on... I thought this one was amazing. I just loved the math connection - not a big fan of math myself, but after this... My favourite part would be the symbolism with Twister. "Spin good, and you win. Spin bad, and you wind up in a painful heap on the floor, wondering why you'd put your hand just there." Loved it. Now I'm off to read some more of your wonderful work...
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
that was good
| space77 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
A VERY clever take on The Line... really loved how you wove all the terminology into their back-story and the future picture you painted.
And, yeah, you reminded me how much I disliked Math and anything to do with formulas and calculations and all that! LOL!
| mumrulz chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
You have been missed!
**I really hope you like this
...Nope...didn't like it...loved it!
You may not know how to categorize your writing style...but I do...it's perfect!
I loved 'Geometry'...& now I can honestly say it. LOL :-)
Loved it from Booth's perspective - all the insightful, emotion filled memories, the way that he summed up his partnership/relationship with Brennan, right from the beginning & when the line was first drawn.
You've gotta love Booth, guarding her, protecting her, watching over her...from his car, her building, the stairwell - all without her knowledge...all for his own peace of mind.
**he had to watch his partner find contentment in a long-term relationship. A relationship that wasn't with him. Like a wolf in a trap, he circled madly, contemplating how much of him would need to be sacrificed before he could gain his release. But he couldn’t do it. Worse, much worse than being confronted daily with the object of his desire would be to not be confronted daily with the object of his desire.
...*sniff* you were pulling on my heartstrings here.
Loved all the geometry metaphors - the theme carried throughout.
* The Line
* Then The Line was joined by a Triangle
* The Line had become a Circle, with them at the center
* The Parallel Lines of their lives were no longer parallel; they had finally intersected.
Glad to see you back in the swing of things. :-):-):-)
| SOL-Scion chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I like it. It was well written and the style good so don't fret that much. Looking forward to your following works.
| SuchAGoodGirl chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I know what you mean about ideas coming at the most inopportune moments. Happens to me all the time.
my favorite line, I think, was;
"Instead of the panic that threatened to come out of his mouth, he heard the words he’d spent more than two years trying not to say stumble over his tongue."
I love that you left his actual words to our imagination, and then had him compare what was happening to her own writing.
Look forward to reading more from you when the inspiration strikes.
| Abisian chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
the concept behind this was .. epic genius. xD
| Mina Tepes chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Wow! You really can write!
| alphadine chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
I've never looked at math from that angle. ;D
| jacklynvt11 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
I am not a math fan, but this story rocked. Very cute story. Loved it. Really enjoyed reading it. Amazing job. :)