|Reviews for Searching For Life|
| sydlexi2 chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
Wow, just wow. This chapter is heavy in emotions. I feel bad for both of them. You can evoke more feeling into a chapter than most any other writer out there. Excellent work. I am eager to see where you go with this. Another chapter soon, please?
| epic sweetness712 chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
this was a good chapter- i just started reading the story. filled with turmoil and sadness, but in a good way- im hooked. but feel torn for sarah and veronica and logan. please update soon.
| dontudare chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
WOW! So great and so real! Thanks for posting again! I can't wait to see how this develops!
| SteVie'SGirL chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
The chapter was excellent but so sad. Logan needs to let his wife go if he wants Veronica. Which won't be pleasant but he can't have them both. I didn't think Logan would leave but he does need some distance so he can figure things out. The next chapter should be interesting.
| Spygrrl chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
Yay, an update! :) You really do such a fantastic job of expressing the barely concealed sexual and romantic tension simmering between Logan and Veronica. It was particularly tangible in this chapter.
My heartbroke for them in the aftermath of them sleeping together. The shame and Veronica's line about how they had turned into what they hate. It is just so sad. Especially since it is just a crappy situation for everyone - Veronica, Logan, Sarah and V & L are only trying to navigate it as best they can.
You really have developed such a rich, complex story here. Although, part of me fears what comes next. lol Still looking forward to more nonetheless. :)
| inheritedcraziness chapter 6 . 11/7/2010
Oh my. An update. And what an update!
You write such powerful emotions. As a reader you can't help but be completely lost in the story.
I think that this part sums up you story:
"Her mind was foggy, and couldn't keep up with the fevered pace, barely aware of what he was saying. "Logan, please." At this point, she wasn't sure if she was asking him to stop or begging him to continue; they both seemed like bad ideas."
and the dilemma they're both facing. They don't know how to stop nor how to continue. They are just standing there with the piece of a life that has been that they can't connect with the pieces of a life to come. An incredibly tragic thing.
And poor Sarah being stuck in the middle. I don't actually think there is a happy end for her. Because even if Logan were to go back to her - which my little shipper heart hopes he doesn't - he would feel too guilty to stay. He would feel to much like his cheating excuse of a father.
Okay, that's a fairly long review. But it just proves how much I adore this story and you're writing. Please update. Never mind when, as long as you do update it at some point. I need to see how you are going to end this.
| jaybeans chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
please continue! cant wait to see what happens next!
| palmbeach chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
great chapter. my favorite was when logan showed back up at her apartment. i hate that she told him to leave.
| Selene Appia chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
An epic fic for an epic couple. xD No, seriously, it's great. :)
| lateVMlover chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
I'm not sure how I feel about this. Usually with a love triangle, there has to be one character that isn't as good or deserving as another. You've made Sarah into a perfect saint. Should I be happy Logan is betraying her with Veronica? I rememeber how upset Veronica was when her dad had an affair with a married woman. I don't know...
I do like the emotion in the scene though.
| mixdgrl1979 chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
Wow...I really can't imagine them with anyone else, but I actually cried knowing they just became the worst version of themselves. please update again soon!
| Natskl chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
WOW, u are so cruel...LOL! Could not believe it when I saw a new chapter, I've been hoping and hoping you'd update this story. Now with the new chapter u finally have them confess their feelings to each other and act on it, only to snatch it away again! Yeah...too cruel :-) I so cannot wait for your next update, hopefully it won't take too long this time...pretty please! LoVe it!
| lateVMlover chapter 5 . 10/15/2010
Wow! What a story! I see you haven't added to it in awhile, but I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading what you have written. It's full of such detail and rich emotional depth. I hope you take time to finish it. I want to know how it ends!
| Natskl chapter 5 . 8/2/2010
Have just re-read this story...still love it the second time round. Are you ever going to update? Please don't leave the story where it is now...LoVe need to find their way back to each other! Pleeeezzzz!
| Ophelia Lake chapter 5 . 6/13/2010
I just found this story today and it is so good. You have to update soon, like tonight. I have to find out what happens. I love logan and Veronica and I'm going to root for them everytime. PLease update soon, pretty please