Reviews for Johnny Meets a BrownHaired Angel
PeersHitInMoscow chapter 6 . 6/21/2010
I really like this story! I can see this as actual dialogue that would be in JTHM! Oooh I reallyhope you continue, I'm really curious as to how this all plays out!
bloody raptor chapter 6 . 5/30/2010
Its always nice to see Johnny in his element.
Raven Samantha Byron chapter 6 . 5/28/2010
yeah...
Raven Samantha Byron chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
thank you so much...i laughed hard...
bloody raptor chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
I've got a funny feeling Mitsuki won't like Johnny's "method of reliving stress" when she does eventually come across it.
Raven Samantha Byron chapter 4 . 5/26/2010
more please...and don't wait too long to update or i'll die of boredom..
bloody raptor chapter 4 . 5/25/2010
Neat!
Raven Samantha Byron chapter 3 . 5/11/2010
more, more, more,...that is all you seem to be sick alot, it's okay i am too.
caviar92 chapter 3 . 9/1/2009
i love it,please update!
reddogf.13 chapter 3 . 7/5/2009
CONTINUE! PLEAASE!
dayliena chapter 3 . 5/31/2009
hmm... i defently consider you tell more. and im sure as anyone else that liked it. i had a idia of a sotry that was MUCH like this. brown-haird angel falling in love with nny. never finished the 2nd chapter though. im bad with finishing things i guess. but i beg of you too at leaste finish it for the sake of... pizza?
SG chapter 3 . 5/5/2009
Hiya!

First I'd like to say that I think you're very brave uploading on . Not everybody does that. (I still haven't mustrered up the courage to do it!) So I thought I'd leave you a review. I have to say that the whole "Johnny meets a girl" feels a bit over done (but if that is the setting you want than DO NOT let that stop you). I think your grammar is ok and structure as well. But I have to say that I'm not really sure if I think that Johnny is IC. (He might be though, I mean Johnny is crazy, he does weird stuff all the time)but be careful on how social he is and all the 'touching people-thing'. He is a VERY difficult character to get in touch with (for OCs) and even harder to make him fall in love (since his greatest show if love is murder, so I can understand why you let him ask your character home, but just be careful with that stuff, kay? This is ONLY MY OPINION. You're as free as a bird! :-)
tasty cheez chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
Not a whole lot happened to review on, but you forgot to capitalize.
bloody raptor chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
Don't worry i stick with this one as I find it rather interesting. As far as keeping Johnny in character you have my greatist simpathies I tried it once and failed horribly.
InsaneINmyBRAIN chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
great story you got here! i'd love to read more if it continues! hope to see chapter 4 l8r on! BYE! P
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