|Reviews for First Time|
| quarterdark chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
| Watermelon Kiss chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
I love this. And I disagree with you when you say you need to write more mature stuff; although a kiss is the only lovey-dovey thing you have here, it's so... sensual. Without being over the top with the details.
Love this so much.
| ChasingProse chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Great. But decidedly not a K.
| moonlight ookami chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
oh boy,that was hot.
| Miss Hydrangea chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Perhaps it should be rated a bit higher than K? It seemed to be sensual and charged, despite there only having been a kiss. Haha, I suppose it's a talent, to infuse a kiss with such sensuality, without needing to describe all the slobbery details.
| Sparkling Silver Moon chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Awwh, this is so cute :]
& it leaves it open to so much more! Haha, damn. Kakashi totally liked it, hehe :)
This storry made me all giggly. :D
| almost-moon chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
You know, I usually hate KakashiSakura pairings, but... i like it x] OK, I really liked it, haha
Short and sweet and like the other comment, I also love Kakashi's hesitance
Kudos xx ]
| lll chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Oh my god, this is so, so perfect! I LOVE it! Especially Kakashi's hesitance, lol.