|Reviews for Who am I, I am|
| pandalarios999 chapter 1 . 5/1
| Sam Ward chapter 18 . 3/15
That was kinda fucked up in a way...
| The Ghost Write chapter 18 . 2/9
Hmm... pretty good... kinda ended suddenly. But his none the less.
| Griffin87443 chapter 18 . 1/18
i like the story
| MyAnimeFreedom chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
I like this, its an interesting idea.
| Navn Ukjent chapter 18 . 9/24/2016
Some nice stuff in this fic, but the constant misuse of homonyms is quite irritating. One example is someone shouting "quite" instead of "quiet" and similar examples.
The way Naruto constanty is running out of chakra is also silly. I can understand there being problems with the Kyubi chakra being disrupted by Orocimaru AND there being some error in how the armor was seals onto Naruto, but most of the other instances seems contrived in order to give Naruto extra problems instead of trying some more creative ways to make various fights interesting.
The way EVERYONE keeps blurting out various secrets is also silly. These people are supposed to be ninja, and nobody knows how to keep their mouth shut!
| PkmntrainerCam chapter 15 . 9/23/2016
Who's the "Dickless" one now, Sai?
| lisa.francis.96780 chapter 18 . 5/30/2016
a sequel alert in the first chapter or summery would be nice
| wow chapter 2 . 5/21/2016
| Natsume-Chan Ruler of Strange chapter 1 . 1/29/2016
| Fairy Tail Demon Slayer chapter 6 . 12/2/2015
You had to have Naruto rant didn't you? with bad grammer and no commas.
| StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
I get that you want this new Naruto to be cool, but he's coming off as obnoxious. If there's even the briefest moment where he can draw attention to himself, he seems to do it. You draw out scenes that should have been over after a few sentences, and somehow cram multiple paragraphs of dialogue into it just so Naruto can show off. Whats the point? Why are you doing this?
| Foxy Engineer chapter 18 . 8/2/2015
Wow that's was good, and different
| Battlesny chapter 17 . 6/14/2015
if Naruto's version of henge is completely physical change on a scale that even
allows a female form to become pregnant, wouldn't that fix that little mortality problem pedosnake seems to have?
as long as the user has the uses the technique they can be any age they wish to be and unlike Tsunade's henge, this one would actually make the body physically younger.
| Battlesny chapter 10 . 6/14/2015
idiot pervert. Naruto says he ordered something 'before' the exam and Jiraiya's first thought is that it might be for the arm he broke 'during the invasion'.