Reviews for Merciless Rain
LaLa the sad doll chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
i like to see canderous being hard yet showing he can be soft 3 it
Mother of Ducklings chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
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Jocasta Silver chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
This is just beautiful. I love how Canderous slowly becomes attached to Ice. Plus it makes a great Ice origin story.
Theano chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Beautifully done! I love it!
adenn vode chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
This is awesome. I really love how you captured Canderous. These experiences on Davik's front lines are believable and add a lot to the negative opinions of Taris he voices in game. I really like how you describe his seduction style, too.

I hope you don't mind I took my login from this story. I've been reading a while but I never signed up. I basically did to comment on your story.
sharinganavenger chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Beautifully done. It's always unusual to see writers look at the noncentral characters in this kind of depth, and you made Ice a very powerful figure here. Your take on Canderous was wonderful as well. Nice writing.
DestinyOfAshes chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Wow! This is absolutely brilliant, I loved it! The way you wrote Canderous was awesome, completely authentic yet building on what we saw in the games. I am very impressed, cheers!