Reviews for A new adventure
Moosedrool chapter 4 . 8/11/2016
I don't know what to do with this story but laugh
fishhead chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
your god damn right hi im ash i fucked misty and may and now let me go do dawn i mean what the hell! lemon at its worst!
Pokeheroesadvance chapter 4 . 1/12/2012
the lemon is okay, but the story is kind of rubbish. however, with a bit of work, you could get really good!
ViBookWorm chapter 4 . 5/30/2011
Ahh poor clueless Ash!
Wildstar93 chapter 4 . 12/28/2010 :O
pokenut chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
have may seduce a girl.(bow chika bow wow.)
RustKnight chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
that was hilarious!
estelin chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
Silver Eagle123 chapter 4 . 12/23/2009
That story was neat, SO MUCH LEMON! I should get my sis to read this! Thanks for the awesome story! lol!
Anon chapter 4 . 11/5/2009
Pendar chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
LOL! XD! You almost made me piss myself man! I hope you make more!