|Reviews for A new adventure|
| Moosedrool chapter 4 . 8/11/2016
I don't know what to do with this story but laugh
| fishhead chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
your god damn right hi im ash i fucked misty and may and now let me go do dawn i mean what the hell! lemon at its worst!
| Pokeheroesadvance chapter 4 . 1/12/2012
the lemon is okay, but the story is kind of rubbish. however, with a bit of work, you could get really good!
| ViBookWorm chapter 4 . 5/30/2011
Ahh poor clueless Ash!
| Wildstar93 chapter 4 . 12/28/2010
...wow. Just...wow. :O
| pokenut chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
have may seduce a girl.(bow chika bow wow.)
| RustKnight chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
that was hilarious!
| estelin chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
| Silver Eagle123 chapter 4 . 12/23/2009
That story was neat, SO MUCH LEMON! I should get my sis to read this! Thanks for the awesome story! lol!
| Anon chapter 4 . 11/5/2009
YOU ARE SUCH A LOSER!
| Pendar chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
LOL! XD! You almost made me piss myself man! I hope you make more!