Reviews for Shinkirou
Stormshadow13 chapter 38 . 7/24/2024
This was a great story. Thank you so much for a wonderful read. I loved the idea and the way that you wrote all of the characters.

On youtube there is a naruto video citizen. Soldiers, by three doors down.
mtnikolle chapter 13 . 10/24/2023
I am full of sympathy for Kakashi on this reread—the frustration of being continually corrected by children because you aren't doing something the exact way they're used to is far too real.
inumay650 chapter 38 . 5/4/2023
Encontre esta historia.. y puedo decir que es una de las mejores he leido,hermosa
mtnikolle chapter 36 . 6/13/2022
One of my favourite images in this storyLike so many years before, Iruka held out his hand to a confused child—and just like back then, a smaller hand was tentatively placed in his."

This is such a great image of Iruka striving to reach the children who desperately need it because they were never allowed to be children.
guest chapter 38 . 8/22/2020
yes! danzo-haters of the world unite! danzo and root can not be taken down often enough.
StoriesMakeLife chapter 21 . 10/22/2019
This is an amazing take to the "Danzo as Hokage and some guys we like as a rebellion" trope. Thank you.
And the skillful way you embed some flashbacks into the story. "Pranking Asuma" was golden))
Guest chapter 38 . 5/6/2019
This is always amazing thank you
Guest chapter 38 . 4/8/2019
Absolutely loved it
Literally devoured the story
Very beautifully depicted and the plot was worth the sleepless night I put up with to read it
Thank you
mtnikolle chapter 18 . 10/27/2018
I can't stop my own giggles every time I read this chapter - or the earlier ones where the kids gang up on Kakashi and/or Asuma.
Anonymous Person chapter 38 . 7/31/2018
This story is FREAKIN' AMAZING!
Although might I recommend reading Hakumei if you haven't already. The "what if" scenario is actually quite similar though the outcome is quite different.
Anonymous Person chapter 37 . 7/31/2018
As un-honorable as it is to kill a downed opponent all I'll say is that Danzou 200% percent deserves death.
Anonymous Person chapter 36 . 7/31/2018
Ah shit, pretty sure Danzou has just unleashed the Kyuubi (or Kurama since frankly I don't really like calling an of the bijuus by the number of tails they possess) or at least gotten Naruto angry enough that he is going to consciously or unconsciously tap into the Kurama's chakra.
Anonymous Person chapter 35 . 7/31/2018
Yes! I'm holding out on the hope that the splintering wood means that Yamato is joining the fray. Seriously Mokuton is one hell of a useful affinity even if he did gain it through terrible circumstances.
Anonymous Person chapter 30 . 7/31/2018
Jeez, just how many separate resistance movements are there? There is the concentrated one within the village which has been steadily gaining more and more power (for lack of a better word), Jiraiya seems to be trying to rally some help, and now Genma and Raidou, not to mention Ibiki has been mentioned/talked to by two groups so I'll assume he's also part of rebel group.
Anonymous Person chapter 27 . 7/31/2018
I realized exactly what books Gai was referring to after he said "that..." and trailed off. That is hilarious honestly! I was absolutely certain that someone was gonna attempt to murder him for having those books around teens.
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