Reviews for Shinkirou
Julieanna333 chapter 2 . 1/12/2009
This is sounding very intresting keep on updating.
WhyMustIWrite chapter 2 . 1/12/2009
Ah, the tension thickens!

What have you done to Konoha? That's so aweful!

But I love the way you demonstrated such changes with the Hyuuga clan as the children were set to be culled. And the whole thing with Hinata...such an air of mystery here.

Looking at it through Kakashi's eyes was good, as you can see how disillusioned and even somewhat helpless the people around feel.

:) Even with no Iruka, this chapter was great!
iNsAnE nO bAkA chapter 2 . 1/12/2009
_ Cull? Danzo must die! *brandishes sharpy pointy things* Um...I'll leave that to Iruka and everyone else. Cause, I don't know how to handle sharp pointy things. _;; And Hinata being the Harriet Tubman of the Shinobi world. Coo-ell!
micah.n10 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
You're on a story telling roll! This one sounds really interesting too. By the time Iruka and Naruto return (if they do) Konoha's gonna resemble hell under Danzo's leadership.

Moar now plz! *giggles*
WhyMustIWrite chapter 1 . 1/12/2009


don't see it...

So, uh, where's the cliche? ;

Maybe I haven't read as much fanfiction, but I've really never read a plot anything like this. Seems original to me. :) But what do I know?

Anyway, a very interesting set up. Those last two lines piqued my curiosity. Yay! Now I have ANOTHER well written Iruka fic to look forward to. 8)
iNsAnE nO bAkA chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
First off, love gen so I'm glad there's no romance. Of course, I adore kakairu as well since it's my OTP and rarely read any without that pairing thus the gen was a relief. I know! Gen or kakairu is my game! _ Second of all, nice start! You have a knack for writing unqiue stories so I can't wait to see what happens next!
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