Reviews for Revived
edwardsgirl1998 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
really good
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 8 . 10/9/2010
okay the story was great loved it
Elena0017 chapter 7 . 7/9/2010
love this chapter. are u plannin to write more chapters?
Bokreeder chapter 4 . 7/7/2009
Oh my gosh your story I so good I'm just stopping right now so I won't feel so guilty about not reviewing because you deserve it! Oh and wouldn't Edward already know since Alice can see into the future and Edward

can read her mind? Just a bit of advice
twilight1alice chapter 8 . 4/17/2009
love that story cant wait to read more. you should have a chapter in alice pov of her telling what she think\knows what is wrong with bella
GODISAWESOME chapter 8 . 4/16/2009
Good luck with sorting out your problems! Just wanted to tell you that i love this version of Twilight and that i love some of your ideas!
Spazzy Naty 0.o chapter 7 . 4/16/2009
i liked the chapter but one question i have is does edward kno wat charlie is doing to bella at this point of the story
KiRsTeNLiNdSaY chapter 7 . 4/12/2009
okay, i totally love your story, because its super interesting. im so gonna subscribe to it! ] and i like how jacob thinks that edward is the one hurting bella. and how he never notices that bella never eats.. i would so notice something like that. and then i have a suggestion for you. when you write in edwards point of view make sure you dont write the excat same thing as you did with bella. i find that boring and i dont really like reading it. if you could give it a different perspective then i think it would be more interesting. but other than that great job and definately keep writing! and check out my stories a walk under the moonlight, and its sequel understanding the rules and finding twilight. thanks! ]

~Kirsten
yesisalas chapter 7 . 4/4/2009
I think Bella should tell Jacob about charlie, and then he could protect her while he is there :)!
Acorn9881 chapter 7 . 3/30/2009
Hi!

It's realy great!

I think Jake's kinda stupid and I like Jake in general . . .

Update soon!

Love Yadoodledoo,

Acorn9881
kouga's older woman chapter 7 . 3/29/2009
Don't let Edward take the blame for Charlie!
ste11una chapter 7 . 3/29/2009
I actually like how Jacob didn't guess correctly.

I wonder what the voices were about...?

Hm...ANYWAY, awesome chapter.

I can't wait for the next!
bornagoof chapter 7 . 3/29/2009
okay you don't update like in forever than its a really short chapter? I don't want to complain but... anyway good chapter really great.
NyxNightGoddess1 chapter 7 . 3/28/2009
update! I wanna know what happens! :D
Casamora chapter 7 . 3/28/2009
I have a really bad feeling that Jacob's meddling is going to get Bella into some serious trouble.

Nice story. I have read the one you recommended too. Except I think they stopped it.. or something.
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