Reviews for Save You
twilight642531 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
(sob) of (sob) course (sob) i (sob) cried (cries lots)...
Moony Ju chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
If I cryed? Like a baby.

It's beautiful, really beautiful. But so sad to read it like that, by his POV.

Great story!
Edward's Muse chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Oh my god, I've just felt my face and it's caked in salty tears :( And I was feeling so happy going into this as well...

In a way this story illterates the one major flaw in vampires. And that's why I favour werewolves so much. (But In edward and jacob's case...it's edward all the way baby)

Inevitably every single vampire story in THE WORLD has either one of two endings (thus predictable.) The happy route but SO CLICHE it's not even funny, is the girl gets turned into a vamp by the end. Sometimes I wonder should I even begin a vampire story just for this reason.

The other version...the "sad" version is less uncommon but more heart-breaking...and that's the girl never gets turned into a vamp and she grows old and is in her death bed. And in strolls the love of her life still looking not a day over 17. Again not a prospect that appeals to me.

But I have to applaud you though. You took the less common route and I knew what I was letting myself in for the moment I read the summary. And I'm glad I read this even though it made me blub :)

On a light-hearted note, my tears have dried now and they've caked my face into stiffness. Guess I need to wash my face before bed then :) And on another good-humoured note-Let's hope Edward doesn't put the moves on Bella's grand-daughter now, shall we? lol

Fanx for writing this. Mucho appreciated.
Juliamine chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
WTF... I never reviewed this baby? Can I just say this one is so bittersweet. So sad but happy at the same time. Love it Luna!
siva01 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
My eyes are fullof tears and I have wieght in my heart.

I love and I HATE SO MUCH YOUR STORY. I will never again read that kind of story.
CloseAcct chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Just so you know, i was sobbing like a baby!
Creamed Cheese chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
*sniff* that was amazing :)
Runs-at-dawn chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
OMG, why did you write this story. I cried, A LOT. I guess I should have known not to read it. -sighs-, well you certainly write very well.
Iceblondie chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
OMG that was so beautiful and I am in tears... WOW that tore me down, damn. This is what he wanted for Bella, such a selfless act of love to allow her to have a full life, schooling, husband, children and grandchildren. No regrets since she was happy.
LoveTeamEdward chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I definitely cried! I'm still crying, actually ;)

Very good story. But I don't think she could ever be as happy as you described her. Maybe that's just me xD.
Kendall94 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
aw that was sad...i cried...
gusano chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
There's no bigger proof of love than this. Thank you.
Little Evil Pixie chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Well thank god it didn't happen. this was so sad...
adrienne chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
i couldnt stop crying for like an hour after finishing this. oh god that is so sad im still crying god damnit. its great though
Emerald-Forever chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
i've always read stories where bella is changed or they are all human but i liked this one shot... i cried and it takes alot to do that!
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