Reviews for Save You
wytchwmn75 chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
I haven't cried like since he left her. Of course I'm red and ouffy and have to be to school in an hour. So flippin sad. But beautiful. Damn you and you're good writing. Thank you.
CrystalDreams18 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Yep, I did cry, still am as I write this. Oh goodness! I tell you, it takes a LOT to get me to cry, even more while I'm reading something. But this, boy did this get me! My heart is literally aching!

This was really good. Simple enough with just the right amount of detail. Love It!
Rochelle Allison chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
i sure did cry.

this is beautiful, exquisitely painful. this really is what it would have been like had he been able to keep himself away. it's so sad. too sad.

but really well done.
nicnicd chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Beautiful writing m'dear. I DID cry...a lot :( Still, that was very, very heartfelt. Thank you for writing.
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
oh i am so boo-hooing right now :(
Babette12 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009

I've read a few of these, and this is one of the best. Thank you.
browneyeddaisy chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Very good...can't stop crying.
ShyHarmony chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Words cant explain the emotions you brought. I felt it.
vix2020 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
WOW. Just... wow. You've rendered me speechless. Bravo.
greenfingers chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Ok, not fair, I held it together pretty well while I was reading the story but then I made the mistake of listening to the track, that was it, I lost it big time.

Such a moving piece of text, just beatiful.
Gabysuzanna chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Oh this was just awful (in a beautiful way...) I am so glad that, in my mind, Edward always stuck by Bella and changed her. This was beautiful but too painful to consider. Poor Edward.
Toria842 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009

I love that song (one of my fave SP songs) and it fits the scene so well.

I dont know why, but I kept getting images when reading of it, of him saving her and her becoming young again. LOL.

Great work though :)
KiwiCami chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
It's nearly impossible not crying with this you know?

and I wasn't the exception :/
deb chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
OMG that was beautiful, so sad but beautiful, thankyou.
purpledm9 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I believe in LOVE and that's the avenue I cling it.

But, It is a beautiful, sad story.

"Lest we miss love when he knocks on our door."
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