Reviews for Save You
Lexi Davis chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Wow. This is such a beautiful piece! You really have talent. Such an emotional subject, dealt with in a sensitive and effective manner.
igirl2.0 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
THAT WAS HORRIBLE! Okay, give a moment to explain. It wasn't horrible it's just, I guess, my way of expressing how sad that was. It was so touching. I felt a tear at the end of it. I bet you could write a full on heartbreaker if had more chapters.

It was really good so don't take it as though I was giving any criticism, because it was fantastic.
Twilight-Addict Mandy chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
*sobbing* That was one of the saddest, most emotional things I've ever read... Edward having to endure Bella's death after nearly 70 years apart? I tend to shy away from fics like this because my delicate heart can't take it, but I'm such a devoted fan of yours that I just HAD to read it. It was definitely bittersweet.
xSeverusSnapesLoverx chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
This had my bawling like a baby I swear I was crying hysterically by the end of it ... wow that doesn't happen often with fanfics especially but this one was very well done despite the depressing nature of it.
DancingStars chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
You made me cry. It was that good.
qupet chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Very sweet story.

And yeah, it made me cry :)
Mishelyy chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
This is BEAUTIFUL. Im still crying and i know my eyes will look weird tomorrow but really this is just plain wonderful. At least i know this wasn't how Bella and Edward ended or i'd be dead from sadness. but i love sad stories and now this is my favorite. :)
SweetHart2BME chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
oh that is so sweet...i about cried...i love it!
iHeartGelato2010 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
holy crow!

i can't breathe right now...

my nose is stuffed...

oh god...

stories like these always make me cry...

i think my desk is wet too... D

oh god...

s.alexie chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
this is amazing! i am seriously crying! you have a gift that, obviously, cannot be ingnored. i wish that i possessed even HALF of the talent that you have. alas...nope! this is beautiful. you don't get many fics like this. great job!
NiColiee chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
OMG! this story made me cry! like so much! even more than when i cried in New Moon. so sad! my heart was thumping so fast the whole time i was reading it. good story! but its just so heartbreaking for me.
seamonkologist chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Beautifully heartbreaking. Bittersweet. I loved it.
RememberMe13 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
i am litterally bawling!

can i do anything to help u publish this? sadly that was joke because that would be stealing SM work! dammit! this is way better than anything she ever did

im srry, i am litterally crying, im not kidding!

that was the most beautiful piece of writing i have ever read! especially on fanfiction!

i dont know whats making me cry, the beauty or the plot!

i didnt know it could happen, but u made me worship their relationship even more!

i want a man to love me like that!...

the opening, and the death... wow

i mean i would be saddened by this plot line alone

but this beauty of the writing intensified the emotions to no end!

this was amazing and needs to be nomintated for something!

i would really like ot tlk furthur on ur writing and this story, please PLEASE contact me!


Gossip Girl

ps. It makes me really glad that this didnt really happen in the series

my heart would stop along with Bellas and Edwards! I loved it, but they deserve each other for forever! AMAZING!
KnittingVamp7 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
wow, this was really nice. like, definitely cry-worthy. :) i always cry when one of them dies, cause you always expect forever with them.

i really liked it.
doreansmomma chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Now you've done eyes are swollen, my nose is red and runny and I can't catch my breath! This was so amazing and sweet. Excellent story!
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