Reviews for Save You
s.alexie chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
this is amazing! i am seriously crying! you have a gift that, obviously, cannot be ingnored. i wish that i possessed even HALF of the talent that you have. alas...nope! this is beautiful. you don't get many fics like this. great job!
NiColiee chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
OMG! this story made me cry! like so much! even more than when i cried in New Moon. so sad! my heart was thumping so fast the whole time i was reading it. good story! but its just so heartbreaking for me.
seamonkologist chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Beautifully heartbreaking. Bittersweet. I loved it.
RememberMe13 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
i am litterally bawling!

can i do anything to help u publish this? sadly that was joke because that would be stealing SM work! dammit! this is way better than anything she ever did

im srry, i am litterally crying, im not kidding!

that was the most beautiful piece of writing i have ever read! especially on fanfiction!

i dont know whats making me cry, the beauty or the plot!

i didnt know it could happen, but u made me worship their relationship even more!

i want a man to love me like that!...

the opening, and the death... wow

i mean i would be saddened by this plot line alone

but this beauty of the writing intensified the emotions to no end!

this was amazing and needs to be nomintated for something!

i would really like ot tlk furthur on ur writing and this story, please PLEASE contact me!


Gossip Girl

ps. It makes me really glad that this didnt really happen in the series

my heart would stop along with Bellas and Edwards! I loved it, but they deserve each other for forever! AMAZING!
KnittingVamp7 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
wow, this was really nice. like, definitely cry-worthy. :) i always cry when one of them dies, cause you always expect forever with them.

i really liked it.
doreansmomma chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Now you've done eyes are swollen, my nose is red and runny and I can't catch my breath! This was so amazing and sweet. Excellent story!
Chel88 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
That..was so sad! But I thought that it was written very nicely!

Fantastic job!

bab1067 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Bitter sweet and sad. The regret, even though he wanted her to be happy. True soul mates.
zgirl21 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Wow...I had little tears in my eyes when I got to the end of this. Well done. I just wish it had a happier ending! Oh well...I guess I'll just have to wait for your next update of Good & Evil ;).
Jen2112 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
such a sad but happy story...very different take on things...I enjoyed it...
algonquinrt chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
I usually hate these NM redos because there's always an out: Bella is changed as an old woman and becomes young again or Edward falls for her grand-daughter who is just like her. As OOC as it would be for Bella to ever move on, your version does do this plot twist justice.
suzyq402 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Oh my...My heart is breaking...I can see Edward..sobbing...broken hearted. I want to take away his help him...or hold him. But, I am not Bella and we all know that she is the only one who could do that.
Lizabeth1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
Oh you are SO evil! I usually don't like stories about Bella and Edward being apart, but you sneaky devil, you've once again created a unbelievably beautiful story that made me cry...again! Have you no shame?


Love ya!
Serndipitydooda chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
That was beautiful...just tragic, raw and beautiful. Of course I'm sobbing my heart out and will be cursing you in the morning for my puffy eyes and giant nose but it's worth it.
slimjimjerky chapter 1 . 1/12/2009

That was AMAZING writing!

I almost couldn't read it i was so depressed (which is a good thing)

And I started crying.

OMG my heart hurts now.

And after reading this, I finally realized that if BD had ended like that, I would have strangled Stephanie Meyer.

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