Reviews for Another Six Months
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 4 . 10/23
I love what you did with forgiveness in this. I hate how society seems to tell everyone that they should forgive everything, that everything can be forgiven. That’s not true. Not all things can be forgiven, not all people deserve forgiveness. And there is nothing wrong with that.
MoonWiccan6 chapter 4 . 1/10/2012
Wonderfully done
Naire chapter 4 . 5/30/2011
Wow. Just, wow. I really liked the ending. It was amazing how House described a sunset. Almost poetic :D

Very nice ff :)
sernity1806 chapter 4 . 6/3/2009
how sweet.
killer0shorti chapter 4 . 5/18/2009
sweet twist, interesting and very cool.
Shadow Cat17 chapter 4 . 4/16/2009
This was a great sequal!
Matteic chapter 4 . 2/9/2009
My heart is all mushy now ! Thank you for writing these wonderful stories. It's fantastic what you can do with words !
goldiloks chapter 4 . 1/21/2009
aw! that ending was BEAUTIFUL.

just a tip, though: the word "end" really detracts from it. a lot. people will get that it's the end of the story by the fact that the status is "complete" and there are no more chapters. don't take away from the beauty of the moment.

also, make more clear who's talking. it gets confusing. if you're describing an action of one characters and that same character then says something, it's okay to put that on the same line. to place actions and words on seperate lines makes the reader think it's not of the same character.
EclecticRegard chapter 4 . 1/19/2009
:D Wow. I loved it. Very good, indeed.
chiclete chapter 4 . 1/18/2009
Oh, this was just perfect! I almost cried here. Amazing.

Only part I didn't like was the "END" word down there...
Julie chapter 3 . 1/17/2009
I really love this, truly amazing I hope there will be more D
chiclete chapter 3 . 1/15/2009
Cameron and Foreman! LOL!
Green Penguin chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
ooh, that was interesting. wow.

keep it up! great stuff.
chiclete chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
I loved it. Every tiny bit :)
shaemichelle chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
HEEhee, that's so cute. It honestly made me giggle.
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