Reviews for ANBU
JOHNXgambit chapter 41 . 2/22/2014
holy balls that escalated quickly BTW nice job on the kakashi doctor who thing
NocturneKoan chapter 32 . 2/22/2014
Oh man, the tension and suspense are seriously getting to me. I barely stopped myself from just clicking "Next" straight away and take a moment to review. I'm loving the action, mystery and intrigue. Plots, within plots, within plots, the story is really coming into its own right now.
NocturneKoan chapter 24 . 2/22/2014
I have to admit I wasn't too impressed with Hinata's introspective scene. It was ok for the most part but it got repetitive really quickly, I found myself skipping to the end and not being surprised at the outcome (because it was sorta obvious where it was going). Still though the rest was an enjoyable read, very dramatic especially towards the end and I almost thought they were over at one point, which would have been interesting, but I'm happy with the way you ended the chapter. Nicely done!
NocturneKoan chapter 21 . 2/22/2014
I've realised that I've read most of this before (and probably not reviewed it). The story has been great so far though, so I don't mind reading it again. I really like the way Naruto and Hinata have developed from the beginning of the story to this part. Especially seeing as how in some ways they haven't changed at all; Naruto is still a sociopath uncaring of the lives of others and Hinata is still hungry for power and somewhat deranged. They've just had that little something added to their character. Anyway, I'll be reading on, great chapter and story so far.
I'd Kill me chapter 41 . 2/22/2014
Wow, Shit just got real. That was a really confusing chapter. I kind of hope you add in a little tie bit with Temari and Shikamaru though. That would be funny. Great job though you are really good at this.
MuertePeluda chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Ah I love a good rebellion, great chapter. (Thumbs-up)
naruhina-namikaze chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Ah, excellent. Every chapter you reaffirm what I love so much about this story. Still, I do wish I had the effort to write like 100,000 words in like 3 weeks, if I did I'd actually finish my fic.
Chewie Cookies chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Holy crap! That was one hell of a chapter!

Keep up the good work!
redspud chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Of course I'm glad that Naruto, Hinata, Shikamaru, and Iruka are actually alive...but there is one thing.

I'm holding out hope that little Ichiraku Naruto made it. You pretty much confirm Ayame was killed but little Naruto's fate isn't outright stated. The crowd would've gone ballistic the instant the boy was attacked, anyway. And he could have just been injured (albeit grievously...)

...

Pretty please?

Anyway, looking forward to see where this goes.
Ryuujin96 chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Excellent chapter. I really hope the last one before your hiatus is not a cliffhanger chapter and that it will feature Naruto and Hinata's reunion, with said reunion not being at the very end of the chapter. One thing you might want to consider is having some chapters of calm before going into the storm.
Firestorm2004 chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Very interesting story. Loved the latest chapter, and can't wait to see Naruto and Hinata reunited.

Keep up the excellent work, and I look forward to reading more.
Kataangforever2 chapter 41 . 2/21/2014
Why are you shuffeling things around? You should really spend more time on the details. Your stort is fantastic,but if you continue like this,you'll ruin it...
NocturneKoan chapter 2 . 2/20/2014
Nice chapter but...seriously?! You spelt "profit" as "prophet" at some point. XD Actually made me laugh, that's funny man...
JOHNXgambit chapter 41 . 2/20/2014
damn it was a necessary but it had to be done with as dark as this story is there has to be a huge shock in order for progress to happen
zigmas chapter 41 . 2/20/2014
I'd really love to read both of those stories - but I HATE unfinished GREAT fics...
Which is why I'm leaning to rather suggesting on FINISHING this one FIRST.
Pweettyy puhliiize. :)))

On-topic:
Poor Ayame - a totally unnecessary victim.
Not plot-wise, emotion-wise.
Especially with you saying that DEAD will stay DEAD...
I'll be honest - I care for Hiashi MUCH less. :)))
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