|Reviews for Sand Through My Fingers|
| LongLoreLover chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I like this very much. I had been thinking about doing a POV from a girl who appeared on the roof-top in Manhattan, like they showed in the resolution at the end, and I very much approve the shady prolouge you gave, starting with the splintered views, from she to I. Very moving, and the way you ended this chapter definitely has me wanting to read more. My brain is a little dead from the midterms I had today, but I will reread this chapter tomorrow, and if you upload another chapter, I can give a better review. Do you, and take care; I encourage you to continue this...-LongLoreLover )
| Jeffery chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
I like the sort of flash back you had in there. Very nice!
| Lightning Streak chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Ooh, positively chillng! I think you did a good job on the physical description of this. Good job, and keep up the good work!