|Reviews for The Chosen 12: The life of the Smash Universe|
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/12/2013
THE SUSPENSE IS LITERALLY MURDERING ME ಥ_ಥ
Please update... I hope you haven't abandoned it...
| FoXXel chapter 8 . 9/4/2012
Hey aren't you going to continue this? Because this is awesome. But it's been, like, 3 years after the last update. I hope you wont abandon this...
| Storyperv chapter 8 . 6/3/2012
the damn suspence! you have too continue! seriously! like the wourld depends on it!
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
Why aren't you continuing this it's really good:(?
| rubyyoshi chapter 4 . 4/4/2012
No! Yoshi! Other then that, really go so far. Aside from a few spelling errors, (Dang typing so fast) its really good. Also, do you mind if I do a little side story of this? I can pm you the details for it.
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 8 . 1/20/2012
Woah...awesome! :D Finally. This story is just too awesome!
| Negai Liu chapter 8 . 8/9/2011
This is beyond awesome! A few grammar mistakes, but otherwise, amazing!
It's too damn good and probably contains 200% of your recommended dose of awesomeness.
Please update soon! :)
| Thought Cloud chapter 3 . 1/13/2011
Lucas acts like his shoe size! And his shoes are bigger than Ness's! :D
| Pk Love Omega chapter 8 . 11/25/2010
OH MY GOODNESS this is SO EPIC. NEEEEESS! LUCAS! I suddenly love Pikachu and Sonic! My heart nearly stopped..Oh god...
Please make chapter 8! :) PLEASE!
| Pk Love Omega chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
This story IS SOOOOO EPIC! Featuring my fav characters, Lucas and Ness:)) AWESOME job! I love this story soooo much! :D
| Super Shadowsonic chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Hey Pure this is actually Superbrawlsonic from deviantart. I didn't think I would see you here. And I see from your profile that your still alive. I got a whole bunch of other stuff on here now. Anyway please try and update.
| killerboss2 chapter 8 . 2/25/2010
| Thought Cloud chapter 8 . 1/23/2010
OMG! Ness! Lucas! Are you OK? Oh, curse you, Chaos. I wonder who they'll come after next... or they'll still target Ness. (I hope its because he's the best of the veterans. Jigglypuff's the 2nd best! This is an opinion.) This is an awesome story. Another collection in my favorite Lucas fanfictions!
| Carito-fox chapter 8 . 1/14/2010
Shall I say how much I love this fic, wan? owo
Oh god, everything sound and looks so awesome, da wan! XD
I love this, and enjoy every minute of it, some parts send shivers down my spine but I really liked all of it, wan x3
You don't know how much I love Pikachu, and I'm starting to fell in love with the PK boys
Okay in this chapter... I can almost SWEAR that the imagine of Lucas holding Claus before he died was flashing in my head all the time, and I'm almost sure Lucas saw it too, wan...
Please continue, this is so cool, wan TwT
(Ignore the 'da wan' please, just a verbal(?) tic, wan XD)
| Nira Rose chapter 8 . 12/31/2009
...this is really, REALLY awesome. Keep at it, please! Oh and, Happy New Years! (even if it is a few hours too early... .; )