|Reviews for Offering|
| HyxSydin chapter 1 . 4/28
_ I came to check your profile, noticed you had written a JP3 fic and just had to read it, so glad I did.
Poor Billy is left feeling rejected while Alan struggles to face him again after what happened silly fools.
| madamwolf chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
I didn't take it as a pre-slash at all, but that might be because I don't have a slashy mind. But either way it was a good story, and although I'm not a big fan of JP3 I do like Billy and I think you caught his and Grant's personalities well.
| Yurrei chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
liked it. keep writing
| Rooster chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Srs. You totally captured both Billy and Alan's personalities to a point where I wouldn't be surprised if this was the actual aftermath from the film.
I desire more of your beautiful JPI writing. These two need moar love.
| Jek chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Quite a nice short story; it could be a nice first chapter of a long story, but is good on it's own too. _
| Sassy Lil Scorpio chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
I noticed you said your fic is supposed to be pre-slash, but to me, it works just fine as Alan and Billy as professor and student without the slashy undertones. I was intrigued by the idea that Billy felt he had to make it up to Grant for stealing the eggs. I'm not a big fan of JP3, but I like how you wrote about the tension between Grant and Billy, and how Billy tries to get Grant to warm up to him on some level. Your title was appropriate too. Great job!