Reviews for Piracy: The New Generation
Guest chapter 77 . 7/19/2014
When are u gonna updated ur story 2015?
Edwinstar43 chapter 75 . 4/14/2014
Name:Edwin Balwood
Gender:Male
Age:15
Race:human
Speciaty:Prankster/Swordsman(Learned a few techniques)
Devil Fruits/weapon/attacks:He Ate the Tei-Tei(air) fruit , a devil fruit that grants the user the ablity to use the air for illusions to fool opponets or use it as a weapon against them.
Sora Ken(Air Blade) edwin can cover his kantanas with air to increase ther speed
Sora nijuushin(Air doppleganger) He can create a clone to confuse his enemy

Tatsumaki(Tornado) Creates a mini tornado by spinning then attack

Itazur fuu (Prankway) Attacks enemy with twenty different pranks till enemy is out cold
Gokirohanma(Five Kilo Hammer) a fake hammer made with a giant ballon and a wooden stick used to scare opponent
Kiatsu hou (atmosperic cannon) He use his left hand to focus all the air pressure to create a powerful blast.

Despite his devil fruit power his weapon of choice are two katananas and his homemade pranks in battle.

Likes:Pirates(Peace mains),Traveling to exotic islands,people that he can trust.
dislikes:Marines,World Government,,People who kill for money and pirates who raided passenger ships

personality:Carefree(some stuff will rub off him),Kind(Because he cares for those he hold dear to him)Adventurous(because he always wants to explore)
Negative:Foolish(During Dangerous situations)Impaitent (at the last minute)Nervous(Facing his worst fears that would come true)Hobbies:Creating pranks and weapons to fight with and explore while on an (Getting capture and sent to impel down)(those close put indanger)

Dream:To become the world's strongest swordsman

Apperance: he is 5.5ft normal body shape and he has a cross tattoedd to his right shoulder. He has short, messy platinum-blond hair but no bangs.
He has two Dark-Brown eyes but uses a hat to cover them. He wears a regular t-shirt,black pants and a pair of black shoes. He wears a black belt to carry his katanana's and carries a red bag with his pranks.

History:When Edwin was a child he was raised as an orphan who ask to be thought how to fight with swords. He always dreamed on becoming a pirate when he got lived on the edge of town in a small abandon house and created pranks such as fire works,a fake hammer,a dummy and other things used during his fight in town, trick people,and escape from getting into trouble. It was then he found the Sora-Sora fruit in a pirate ship and toke a bite only to be trying to spit it that day, He had produce abilites with the air and decided to practice to master his skills.

at the age 13 he left town own and hid on passenger ships and took food to one of the ships he was discovered so he ran from the tried again a few more times but they all ended the same. he decided to use a small boat and sail after stowing away on a currently on a boat searching for a pirate crew to join.

P.S This is the last rewrite of my OC
Edwinstar43 chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
When are there gonna be more chapters?
Edwinstar43 chapter 76 . 3/25/2014
Name:Edwin Balwood
Gender:Male
Age:15
Race:human
Speciaty:Prankster/Swordsman(Learned a few techniques)
Devil Fruits/weapon/attacks:He Ate the Sora-Sora fruit , a devil fruit that grants the user the ablity to use the air for illusions to fool opponets or use it as a weapon against them.
Sora Ken(Air Blade) edwin can cover his kantanas with air to increase ther speed
Sora nijuushin(Air doppleganger) He can create a clone to confuse his enemy

Tatsumaki(Tornado) Creates a mini tornado by spinning then attack

Itazur fuu (Prankway) Attacks enemy with twenty different pranks till enemy is out cold
Gokirohanma(Five Kilo Hammer) a fake hammer made with a giant ballon and a wooden stick used to scare opponent
Kiatsu hou (atmosperic cannon) He use his left hand to focus all the air pressure to create a powerful blast.

Despite his devil fruit power his weapon of choice are two katananas and his homemade pranks in battle.

Likes:Pirates(Peace mains),Traveling to exotic islands,people that he can trust.
dislikes:Marines,World Government,,People who kill for money and pirates who raided passenger ships

personality:Carefree(some stuff will rub off him),Kind(Because he cares for those he hold dear to him)Adventurous(because he always wants to explore)
Negative:Foolish(During Dangerous situations)Impaitent (at the last minute)Nervous(Facing his worst fears that would come true)Hobbies:Creating pranks and weapons to fight with and explore while on an (Getting capture and sent to impel down)(those close put indanger)

Dream:To become the world's strongest swordsman

Apperance: he is 5.5ft normal body shape and he has a cross tattoedd to his right shoulder. He has short, messy platinum-blond hair but no bangs.
He has two Dark-Brown eyes but uses a hat to cover them. He wears a regular t-shirt,black pants and a pair of black shoes. He wears a black belt to carry his katanana's and carries a red bag with his pranks.

History:When Edwin was a child he was raised as an orphan who ask to be thought how to fight with swords. He always dreamed on becoming a pirate when he got lived on the edge of town in a small abandon house and created pranks such as fire works,a fake hammer,a dummy and other things used during his fight in town, trick people,and escape from getting into trouble. It was then he found the Sora-Sora fruit in a pirate ship and toke a bite only to be trying to spit it that day, He had produce abilites with the air and decided to practice to master his skills.

at the age 13 he left town own and hid on passenger ships and took food to one of the ships he was discovered so he ran from the tried again a few more times but they all ended the same. he decided to use a small boat and sail on the ship he stowed away currently on a boat searching for a pirate crew to join.
Edwinstar43 chapter 77 . 3/25/2014
Name:Edwin Balwood
Gender:Male
Age:15
Race:human
Speciaty:Prankster/Swordsman(Learned a few techniques)
Devil Fruits/weapon/attacks:He Ate the Sora-Sora fruit , a devil fruit that grants the user the ablity to use the air for illusions to fool opponets or use it as a weapon against them.
Sora Ken(Air Blade) edwin can cover his kantanas with air to increase ther speed
Sora nijuushin(Air doppleganger) He can create a clone to confuse his enemy

Tatsumaki(Tornado) Creates a mini tornado by spinning then attack

Itazur fuu (Prankway) Attacks enemy with twenty different pranks till enemy is out cold
Gokirohanma(Five Kilo Hammer) a fake hammer made with a giant ballon and a wooden stick used to scare opponent
Kiatsu hou (atmosperic cannon) He use his left hand to focus all the air pressure to create a powerful blast.

Despite his devil fruit power his weapon of choice are two katananas and his homemade pranks in battle.

Likes:Pirates(Peace mains),Traveling to exotic islands,people that he can trust.
dislikes:Marines,World Government,,People who kill for money

personality:Carefree(some stuff will rub off him),Kind(Because he cares for those he hold dear to him)Adventurous(because he always wants to explore)
Negative:Foolish(During Dangerous situations)Impaitent (at the last minute)Nervous(Facing his worst fears that would come true)Hobbies:Creating pranks and weapons to fight with and explore while on an (Getting capture and sent to impel down)(those close put indanger)

Dream:To become the world's strongest swordsman

Apperance: he is 5.5ft normal body shape and he has a cross tattoedd to his right shoulder. He has short, messy platinum-blond hair but no bangs.
He has two Dark-Brown eyes but uses a hat to cover them. He wears a regular t-shirt,black pants and a pair of black shoes. He wears a black belt to carry his katanana's and carries a red bag with his pranks.

History:When Edwin was a child he was raised as an orphan who ask to be thought how to fight with swords. He always dreamt on becoming a pirate when he got lived on the edge of town in a small abandon house and created pranks such as fire works,a fake hammer,a dummy and other things.
Edwinstar43 chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
Do charaters have to be at least 17 years old?
Chichi.Cherry chapter 73 . 9/27/2010
Aww no votes for my cutie-pie Craigmirra?
Chichi.Cherry chapter 67 . 9/27/2010
...When did Nampu become gay? He's Craigmirra's! T-T
breadbutterpudding chapter 77 . 7/28/2010
Ouch at the tongue part... XD
Dthehalfdragon chapter 77 . 7/24/2010
Nice chapter. I cant wait to see the next one.
Nezumimaru chapter 77 . 7/24/2010
Yay! New Chapter! Now if only I could get my laptop fixed, i'd get a new chapter up too...
LaZy-RaIn-DaNcEr chapter 77 . 7/23/2010
That was awesome! Way to go Tenpan! I liked how her opponent only answered with nodding and shaking her head lol That devil fruit of Dargano's was pretty cool though. It was very clever of Tenpan grabbing Dargano's tongue then electricuting it. Ooh next is Morte's fight I can't wait to see how it turns out X D

Keep up the good work! Update Soon Please! _
Cross writer453 chapter 21 . 6/9/2010
The chapters ar getting better and better. Oh and I created an CP9 Oc just incase the Cross Skull crew encounter them.

Name: Lei-Lei Law( no relation to Dark Doctor Trafalger Law)

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Specialty/Position: CP9 member.

Race: Human

Devil Fruit/Weapon/Attacks:(You don't need a Devil Fruit, if you do not wish for it) Kuma Kuma no Mi, Model: Giant Panda. The fruit grants the user the power to turn into a half panda or a full panda, giving the user increased strength, durability, and to make everything he does in full panda form adorable as girls would see.

He knows all forms of Rokushiki except for the seventh form, and the techniques he uses the most are Soru and Geppou. Even when not using Soru he's fast, and had learned how to read his opponents body movements to dodge, counter, or send an attack their way. His douriki level is 2777.

-Kaiten Rankyaku(Revolving Storm Leg)- Spinning his body at high speeds, Lei-Lei sends out a circular wave of sharp air around him that expands as long as he spins, or he sends out multiple Rankyaku strikes all directions. The drawbacks however are no control over the direct where the blades are going, and that he becomes really dizzy after the attack.

-Shigan Kamisori( Finger Gun Razor)- Instead of using one finger to deal damage, Lei-Lei uses all five in a straight row to stabs his opponents. He hates how lethal it is though.

Along with those he also knows many martial arts styles, but he uses a style similar to Drunken Fist the most because it's his favorite.

Physical Appearance: Despite being male, he looks and sounds female, and on a number of times has been hit on by multiple people because of this. He has long purple hair braided down his to his lower back, pink eyes, a lean body, and is 5'11ft tall. However when he's in half panda form he looks a bit more muscular and 2ft taller, but he still has a feminine looking face. He dresses in baggy black sweat pants, a white Mandarin styled shirt with black buttons and lining, and a pair of grey kung-fu slippers and gloves. When he's in CP9 meetings he wears an all black version of his outfit. He also wears a black felt kasa with a wooden brim.

History: At the tender age of 4, Lei-Lei's parents went to sea and never came back, and after 7 weeks of searching were effectively labelled as lost. Heartbroken and orphaned he later found himself train with others to become a CP9 agent, and as years went by he found himself as one of the top three in his generation's troop. During his early years as an operative however, he was ruthless, vicious, and saw his life and others meaningless. That changed when he received a letter and a strange fruit as a parcel one day, he was 16 and he wondered why anyone would send him anything that day. First he took a bite from the fruit, and by the taste of it thought it was rancid and rotten. After disposing of the putrid tasting fruit, he read the letter and froze...it read happy bithday to our son Lei-Lei. He wept that night, but he was happy for the first time in awhile.

The next day most people that knew him thought something was wrong with him. His usual cold and uncaring attitude did a complete 180 and now he was open and kind. For 5 years he remained this way, and he promised for the rest of his life he would stay that way.

Personality: Softspoken, good hearted, caring, and peaceful. However he does have a short fuse when a man hits on him, or if a bunch of fangirls are chasing him. He has an irrational fear of spiders, scorpions, and fangirls. His hobbies are training, traveling, and singing.

Likes: Music, resolving things peacefully, and his full panda form(even he admits it's cute).

Dislikes: Violence, men hitting on him, crazed fangirls(yes he has those), and bugs(arachnids to be exact)

Dream: To leave his status of CP9, and travel the world to find out what happened to his parents.

Other: He's one of the few people on his team that dislikes fighting.
breadbutterpudding chapter 76 . 6/8/2010
the mystery guys like Vraspos annoy me for only one reason:

their history always has me crying... don't know why lol
Cross writer453 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Nice work with the story, pls continue writing as long as you feel able to, and if your still accepting OCs here's mine.

Name: Chance V. Parker, or Blue Hat as everyone else calls him.

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Specialty/Position: Robin Hood(takes from the greedy gives to the needy), Gambler, but if taken on a ship a Business Negotiator.

Race: Human.

Devil Fruit/Weapon/Attacks: He consumed the Kuro-Kuro no Mi, a devil fruit that grants the user the power to create portals through any shadow, and allows the user to control their own shadow(this ability only works for the user's shadow alone, no one elses).

-Kuro Aruku(Dark Walk)- Chance has the ability to walk into a shadow and out through another like a tunnel in a 20 foot radius.

-Kuro Doa(Dark Door)- Chance fades into his shadow only to teleport where his opponent's shadow is. Example: when a persons shadow is facing behind them, Chance will teleport behind him. It also works with objects, but if the object's shadow is too small he can't pass through it. His teleportation reach is 20 feet away from him.

-Kuro Shichi(Dark Seven)- Chance creates seven clones of himself through his shadow, each able to attack on their own accord, but he's only able to maintain the clones for only two minutes due to the energy required to maintain their existence. They resemble silhouetted versions of Chance.

-Kuro Dansu(Dark Dance)- Used with Kuro Shichi, the clones encircle the enemy and attack with whatever weapon Chance is holding.

-Kuro Ken(Dark Sword)- He creates a makeshift weapon from his own shadow, but he has to put half his focus into it as though it were a real weapon.

-Kuro Geto(Dark Gate)- Using his shadow as a medium he's able to create a portal to a place he's been and remembers clearly, but if the portal is too big or if the distance is too far this could leave him physically and mentally drained for a few days or so. While not necessarily an offensive move, it's good for quick escapes and surprise.

Along with devil fruit abilities, he also uses a sabre with below mastery skill, and uses throwing knives disguised as playing cards while fighting.

Physical Appearance: He's about 6ft, has a lean body shape, and has 777 tattooed on his neck along with a Royal Flush tattooed on his upper back. He has long dark blue hair that stops at his mid-back, and is tied into a ponytail save for a few bangs that cover his eyes. He has different colored eyes, his right being silver, and his left being gold. He wears a blue gamblers hat, a fully buttoned blue tuxedo coat with black shirt and blue tie underneath, a pair of black slacks, and a pair of black leather shoes and gloves. He has a belt with deck boxes strapped across his waist, a short sabre hung next to his waist in a loose manner, and his face always seems bored with a cheshire smile etched across his lips(kinda like Break from Pandora Hearts).

History: When he was a child, a young Chance was an orphaned street urchin who learned how to steal in order to live, but he always dreamnt of becoming something more. He lived in a small unseen hut outside but near the gate of his town, and had learned how to talk with a silver tongue from a book he found on the streets so he could persuade shop owners to give him discounts. It was by chance one day that Chance stole the Kuro-Kuro no Mi from a pirate that was just about to leave his town's harbor that day, but back then he didn't know what it was, and being curious about it took a bite...only to throw up a moment afterwards. It wasn't until he was being chased later that day that he slowly began to discover his abilities. Right when the group of people chasing him managed to corner him in an ally, Chance began to panic and then began to sink into the ground, emerging from the shadow of a box on the other side of the alleyway. Confused but happy about what happened, Chance first ran home before anyone from the group could find him, and began practicing his newfound powers day and night after that. Soon he began going out at night, stealing from pompous rich folk, and all the while sharing some of his 'profits' with folk less fortunate than he was.

By the age of 10, Chance had been stowing away on ships, and used his abilities to help out poor locals wherever he landed. During one of these trips, two master thieves posing as rich folk took an eye at his skills and abilities. While they were impressed by Chance's thievery skill for his age, they were more interested in his ability to 'walk through the shadows', and after convincing Chance to join them they soon set off a chain of events that Chance never really recovered from. Initial they began teaching Chance how to be a gentleman, and how to successfully flirt with women. However, months after their first meeting, Chance slowly began to suspect something was up. It wasn't until a later incident with a failed job, that the two thieves saved their own skins while leaving Chance to die, but they forgot that due to his powers, Chance was able to teleport to their boat, and set sail away from them. Soon everything seemed to turn bad, after a couple of betrayals and backstabs that happened too soon after the incident, Chance began to close himself away from people, but due to his body's conscious still helped the poor regardless if he could trust them or not. He currently travels alone in his boat place to place gambling, drinking, and stealing hoping to find his place in the world.

Personality: He's carefree, a successful casanova(a flirt), and pleasant to talk to. However he has problems trusting anyone, and most of his partnerships with pirates and sailors alike have both ended up with him backstabbing and/or robbing the people he joined with along with the people he was against. His fears are seeing people he's close to being hurt(which is a small number), and being forced to betray his friends(again a small number). His hobbies include gambling, flirting with women, stealing from pirates, and writing(as strange as it is).

Likes: Gambling, casino games, winning bets, taking treasure from dirty pirates, and wooing women.

Dislikes: People trying to kill/collect the bounty him, shoddy alcohol, and being caught stealing from a ship full of pirates(note: it's not a fun thing having a ship full of people with guns and swords chasing you).

Dream: His primary dream is to travel to exotic lands, and to find atleast seven people in the world he can trust with his life.

Other: He lives by three codes of conduct: 1) Take away from the greedy, give back to the needy, 2) Treat negotiation as though it were a game, 3) Never betray others unless (he is) betrayed by them first. His part as a negotiator is due to him having a silver tongue.

No matter how far you go with this story, I'll still be reading it regardless the choices made in it.
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