|Reviews for Dark Foreigner
| zoobyli chapter 10 . 7/17/2021
I love this story, I really wish you had been able to write the sequel
| PhoenixFire859 chapter 13 . 2/10/2014
Just found this story, please update it soon :)
| Malico74 chapter 13 . 12/16/2013
Great story, I look forward to reading more!
| Nyx Ro chapter 13 . 12/16/2013
Nice chapter! Lots of "showing rather than telling". Not crazy about making 'Ender's Game' Tony's favorite book, but lots of fans of Orson Scott Card's works apparently didn't know about his loopy beliefs.
Gordon... WINCHESTER? Does this presage a crossover with 'Supernatural', giving some backstory into why Gordon Walker's complicated relationship with the Winchester brothers?
| Madances chapter 13 . 12/15/2013
Thank! You!, Thank you!, Thank you so much! I look forward to more. Merry Christmas. Tracy
| Debbie chapter 13 . 12/15/2013
I have enjoyed all the chapters so far and look forward to more! Excellent job!
I will assume you'll let us know when Dark Angel is up when you post more chapters since it's over on the NCIS side.
I write and read mostly Stargate SG-1 so wouldn't know if it was up there.
This site must have changed some formatting because usually when I don't have time to read I can copy and paste, print out to read later. Lately, you can't copy and paste which saves me a lot of paper. I'm a bit upset over this. I will assume I can print out per page but that's more paper than I want to print out.
Keep on writing!
| usagiluv chapter 12 . 4/27/2013
I love this story and Dark Angel i hope you guys continue them. Keep up the amazing work.
| karlii chapter 12 . 7/6/2012
Please work on this... you could be close to at least wrapping up the main story!
| Laura-trekkie chapter 12 . 10/10/2011
Yay, Abby found the place Tony and Sam were taken to. Yay, Tony and Sam got themselves out. But boo, Tony's in a bad way (as usual).
I see this hasn't been updated for quite awhile, but I hope you haven't abandoned it. I need to now what's going on and whether whoever took Tony and Sam will also try to take Daniel at some point, or whether he will be caught before then.
| Laura-trekkie chapter 11 . 10/10/2011
*eep* What's happened to Tony and Sam? What is the goop and will it help solve things?
| Laura-trekkie chapter 9 . 10/9/2011
I'm glad the rest of SG-1 took Daniel's revelations so well. They've still got a lot of questions, I'm sure, but that doesn't stop them thinking of Daniel as family.
| Laura-trekkie chapter 8 . 10/9/2011
Huh, well the cat's out of the bag now. Has Tony revealed his past to Gibbs, too? Why have both of their marks been used? Is it to lure them out, and if so, who is responsible?
| Laura-trekkie chapter 7 . 10/9/2011
Well, Jack took that surprisingly well. I hope Tony gets the same response from Gibbs.
| Laura-trekkie chapter 6 . 10/9/2011
Well, that first meeting went surprisingly well, with none of the more typical hostility from Gibbs at another team encroaching on his investigation.
But why is the Dark Angel symbol back in use? Will Tony and Daniel have better luck figuring it out now they're out of the office and can talk freely?
| Laura-trekkie chapter 4 . 10/9/2011
Well, Daniel's got a heads up at least, but what will Tony do when he sees Daniel again after so long?