|Reviews for Somewhere Other Than The Night|
| bananasrgood chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
like sooo sooo sooo much
i just wish there was more dialogue. wayyyyy too much "inner dialogue" bella spoke to HERSELF more than she spoke to edward in this story! there needs to be more talk! i felt like there were wasnt much more than 10 lines of dialogue in this story! NOT A GOOD THING. hell yeaaa this story is phenomenal, u are an awesome writer too, u just should forget those vital elements of an awesome story...u know, like DIALOGUE. lol
good job anyway :)
...and excuse my rant :(
i really did love it you know.
| TwilightKrazy chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
| belleanne chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
| frumpy-v chapter 2 . 4/27/2010
I thoroughly enjoyed this insanely sweet short story... it happens all too frequently in marriages, only they managed to overcome it. *happy sigh*
| Vanessaqueen chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
I loved this ... Great! You were incredible ... So soft and so sweet. Very good.
I must say that at first wanted to kill Edward for his callousness, but then ... So beautiful!
| appleburple chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
Sweet, HOT, I loved it. Great job!
| VallieValVal chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Wow. I love your stories :) That last line was beautiful, and I feel all warm and fuzzy now. xo
| meryl13 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
wow. What a sweet story. And an Edward Anthony Cullen Jr. at the end _
| rdrumm5 chapter 2 . 3/9/2010
This was a truly amazing story.
| Epatz chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
so beautiful! so romantic! so Jealous! lol
Love your writing :) 3
| laroa23 chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
glad i get to browse some of your stories and found this, yay! i love it :)
| Cristal mariposa chapter 2 . 1/21/2010
Very tasteful and sweet. I really like it
| grandsophia chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
AWNN ! i loved this !
it was so romantic, so touching , so sweet !
| Cola Marie Whitlock chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
r u gonna make more of tht story?
| CRAZYCARE4 chapter 2 . 12/13/2009
Wow what a sweet and loving little two shot.I wouldn't mind a multi chapter of these two based on these two chapters,you are such a talented writer.