|Reviews for Puzzle Pieces|
| suteras chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
yells lkajsf grEAT FIC!
| Runawynd chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Awww this was so cute! 3 Great work! Their little interruption was hysterical, and I thought David's responses were spot-on. But oh goodness, how WILL he explain the puzzle pieces haha...? :
| Shari chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
WoW! I'm so sad that i didn't read it earlier ;.( Really good job! It was so funny . I hope this pairing will be more popular, cause there are only a few FF about them...
| Rinhail chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Nice plot, and your writing is fantastic. c:
Grr, Emma for interrupting.
| remioromen1344 chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
bahahahaha! I laughed. This was great. :D
Loved this story.
| McTreeTheInvaderJ chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
That has got to be one of the Best! Last remnant stories i've read so far, I loved it so much, I love the idea of puzzle peices, and the reflections in the marble floor :D
Haha rush escaped through the window XD Reminds me of the typical princess stories where the father knocks on the door, and the prince/whoever has to escape, through the window ofc. :D
“Exactly why are there puzzle pieces stuck to your back?”
The last line was soo awesome haha, I wonder how David is going to answer that? lmao
Loved the story so much, can't wait to read more of them (If you write more that is XD)
| Dystopian Hope chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
What a lovely story!
It flows together very nicely, and is well written.
I enjoyed reading this, and the ending was adorable.
| Butterfingers chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
He. Many adoring numerical character hearts to you. 3 Nicely written.
Though I must say.. I will probably be alone in that: I can't imagine Rush being proverbial "top". But, I can't really imagine either of them being that. ...Which is kind of hilarious.
| Kaine chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
God the ending made me gigglesnort xD
| coffee-house-girl chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
I really enjoyed this story. I love this couple and the ending was too funny.
| graytabby chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Beautiful! I love these boys together.
| LoweL chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Ugh seriously. why'd you stop there? I know this is a one-shot but more please.
| Guardian Angel101 chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Oh wow! That would be THE most awkward situation to wind up in! I loved this story though, the ending was especially funny! Great work!
| Rose-Dragonfire chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
That ending is priceless... XD
| T0ko chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
That last line was mighty clever. I'm going to have to draw this sometime