Reviews for Too Long
Molly chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Cute! I really liked it
sarah martin chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
awwww :)
Plumtree5991 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Arrr thats so cute :)
rockstar87 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
yo i love your stories your a great righter dude

btw i no i sed dude but i am a girl lol
Ali.Wolfe.XoXo.OxOx chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Awee that was funny but really sweet 33 good job
xXMythical-Midnight-SunXx chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
AW! Too Cute! you are such a good author!
Sam chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
You really needed to drag that sex scene out just a bit. It was like bam, done. Leave something for us...
Patastic chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
This was way cute.

"We did this last night"

LOL

Jasper's so adorable.
SarcasticCharm chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
i luv bellaedward but, i cant help it Jasper and alice r my fav couple outa the whole series! u did a great job, it made me giggle :D!
pigows chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
liked the story! a lot!
PokieDots chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Aw, this was a really adorable cute and sweet story, nice job!
life takes time chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
Alice and Jasper make me way to happy.

And this story caused me to smile like an idoit.

Yay for fluff!
Realynn8 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
This was great, I enjoyed it a lot.
Lucy Marie Swan chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
aw that was sweet plz write more.. and read my stories