|Reviews for Too Long|
| sarah martin chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
| Plumtree5991 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Arrr thats so cute :)
| rockstar87 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
yo i love your stories your a great righter dude
btw i no i sed dude but i am a girl lol
| Ali.Wolfe.XoXo.OxOx chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Awee that was funny but really sweet 33 good job
| xXMythical-Midnight-SunXx chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
AW! Too Cute! you are such a good author!
| Sam chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
You really needed to drag that sex scene out just a bit. It was like bam, done. Leave something for us...
| Patastic chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
This was way cute.
"We did this last night"
Jasper's so adorable.
| SarcasticCharm chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
i luv bellaedward but, i cant help it Jasper and alice r my fav couple outa the whole series! u did a great job, it made me giggle :D!
| pigows chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
liked the story! a lot!
| PokieDots chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Aw, this was a really adorable cute and sweet story, nice job!
| life takes time chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
Alice and Jasper make me way to happy.
And this story caused me to smile like an idoit.
Yay for fluff!
| Realynn8 chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
This was great, I enjoyed it a lot.
| Lucy Marie Swan chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
aw that was sweet plz write more.. and read my stories