|Reviews for The Arrow|
| Beasty chapter 2 . 3/19
So, maybe it's gonna sound dumb but... I didn't really understand it at the last part...with 'the arrow' did you mean like 'love'? or did you mean that scene was just a kind of dream and both of them died?
| RavenSerendipity chapter 2 . 9/17/2014
This was awesome. Hey, I always forget that the heart is on the left too. Lol. I love how you ended it with... For both of them the arrow slipped in further. It was great.
| TheRagingRussian chapter 2 . 6/6/2014
That was good. I enjoyed it a lot.
| SGF from wikia chapter 2 . 10/17/2013
Very good, I liked it. Could do with being longer, but this is very good so far.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
that cant be the end
| Lmb111514 chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
Haha, only Beast boy would do that.:) This was great, I loved it!
| hahahaha chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Haaaaa I get it now
| Jozefski chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I LOVED THIS! HTJHAENHRJO-23GHJ! My thoughts are all discombobulated! That's the kind of effect this fic had on me. I AM SPEECHLESS!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
Don't worry about the periods. They're almost invisible and the gaps they produced were very effective - it forced the reader to pause where you want them to. Loved the last line! Wow!
| thekillerrox123 chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
LOVE IT! This story was so great! Though, I do wish it ended with a kiss... but that's how most stories end, anyway! This was original!
| Anthony1l chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
| beaniek4 chapter 2 . 4/18/2012
Awww! That was so cute! :D
| Fayari chapter 2 . 1/21/2011
| Random chapter 2 . 6/18/2010
That was so cute. Your a really good writer and I loved the description of the beast that BB transformed into. Excellent story. Hope to hear more soon.
| Hellstarz chapter 2 . 6/5/2010
Wow. Just..wow. I've seen some superb writing, but this is...Unique.
Your grasp of the characters is flawless, and the reality you create through your writing is..intense.
Plus, I love the twist on the final line - I've seen very few people manage to think as creatively as you did.