Reviews for Jace and Clary's night of passion
lizzie brooks chapter 1 . 6/7
very badly written. not a good fan fiction. Cassandra's writing style should have been used at the very least
Sherry chapter 1 . 2/26
Boooo! It was decent until he was on top of her! She was a VIRGIN! It would hurt like a bitch! And "SOUL CRUSHING THRUSTS?" WTF?! He LOVES her and wouldn't be pounding her because he knows she's a virgin and wouldn't want to HURT her... aaaand You're all descriptive with everything up until the actual act of sex, and suddenly it's wham bam they both cum together.

...you're like 14 years old aren't you? For shaaaame! Quit writing fan fiction sex scenes! You not only suck at it... you're TOO DAMN YOUNG!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
This is really good but I would like more detail
AlesiaJ89 chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
that was Hot ;)
StelenaClaceLover09 chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Clary & Jace together
cait chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
llllloooovvveee it so much
tmilover5223 chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Really good.
ohmymultifandom chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN IN THE BOOK, haha
shelina chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
I like it but could you write a fan fiction of Clary and jace based on the song sweater weather
Gloria chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Wow!
Mihaela Tudorica chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
That's exactly the way it should if happened in the movie also! Thanks!
The Doctor Rose chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
WHY COULD THAT NOT HAPPEN...other then the fact if a YA book
AudiLion chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Thank god I read the entire book yesterday!
A Cold War Historian chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
SO DAMN HOT!
TOTALLY LOVE THE SHIPPING!
MAKE MORE OF THIS!
clacedreamer chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
if only this really,REALLY,happened!
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