|Reviews for Selena|
| Clear Plastic chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
/Why/ have you posted the exact same story thrice?
| thosebluegreeneyes chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Um, is this even about the It girl?
Because it sounds a lot like the clique
with Selena as Massie because she is the most popular girl her all-girl school and pretty and stuff.
and Danny, who is the star GOALIE of BRIARWOOD as Derrington
And Serena as all the people that copy Massie.
You may want to put your stories under the clique category instead, there are way more readers there anyways.
And also, try separating your paragraphs, it would make it a lot easier to read.
Also, maybe try fixing some of your grammar errors like "most popularist"
Anyways, keep it up and remember to separate that big blob of writing into smaller paragraphs and maybe add a plot or something to it, because I don't really see what the problem is besides people copying her and her having an "annoying" mom.
P.S. Hope you didn't take any of that in a mean way or anything, no offense intended :)
| harleygirl.HG chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
I really like this, it's good!