|Reviews for First To Fall|
| tomboy 26 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Ok .. Zuko and Toph to me are such good friends .. and seeing them as something else never really hit me. But this was awesome and I completely loved their banter and their fight, which Toph totally rocked him in _
This was really good!
| Kuri Yuu chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
I don't know what else to say other than this was very well-written & I LOVED IT!
| ahoykailee chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
loveed it ;D hahaha. you should make more of these toko stories. i liked this one alott. super cute and very well written :)
| Sky chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
This was such a great story! I loved the pretense, and it's brilliantly well written. I was suprised to find that you had just randomly thrown together the diolouge. When Toph was softening him up; brilliant! I laughed so hard. XD
| Niina chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
This was one of my favourite stories about the two, I just kinda hoped you'd make it more mutually romantic, but, and now I contradict myself, it was wonderful in that friendly/cozy/fightingly way, so making it more romantic could spoil the fun. Arg!
Sigh, tell you what, if you write another chapter it'd be even better whatever the chapter would contain!
| A Quiet Chaos chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
This is adorable, and Zuko is so HOTT! :P
| Religion0 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
I don't know about anyone else, but I loved this!
| BrownDog chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
omg! that was so cute!
| Tetsu Deinonychus chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
This is so awesome!
A truly in-character, and twisted, Toko fic!
| Red Princess chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Cute! That little reference to "The Ember Island Players" made me laugh. XD
| CinnamonStuff chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Ooh, me like it! Yes, funny, Toko, sparring, that's all a good story needs. Thank you for this wonderful story!
| lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Nice work, very entertaining. Keep at it!
| SarySoda chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
That was cute
| Angsty Anime Star chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
LOVE IT! Toko rules and this was hilarious.