Reviews for Make That 58
mrsedwardcullen73ca chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
ha ha ha i absolutly loved this story, i think it would be awsome if you added to it, its great, i actually laughed out loud which i hardly ever do
thtgirlkristen chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
ROFLMFAO! That was sexy...and friggin hilarious. Pure awesomeness. Go you.
sandmanstwilight chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
ok I liked it...Now I get the story

Very cute...Is this the end?
Atlaxxxx chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
I would definintly like to see the piano one xD That one sounds very interesting xD And the stair case. You should seriously add those on here xD Keep Writing!

twin of a twin chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
shoecraz chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
lol! great job!
MaluTara chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
that was so much fun to read!

i LOVE dirty Edward! jaja

thanks Alice for the help!

but now i think Bella has awaking a a GOOD way!

i really LOVE it, so is going to favorites!

hope to read more fics from u!

Malu D.
Punk And Lovin It chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
LOL i loved it so kinky hehehehehheehheheheh GREAT JOB
inatowncalledforks chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Keep going, that was fun!
Cullen0128 chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
wow that was really hot. Update again soon
Roseatron chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
ren-san chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Well done!
bellasblush chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Great story!
HopelessRomantic79 chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
:-D Edward letting loose is SEXY! I love just the idea of all of them having kinky sex on the table. ;-)
Nessie21 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Great plot, love it.
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