Reviews for Make That 58
mrsedwardcullen73ca chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
ha ha ha i absolutly loved this story, i think it would be awsome if you added to it, its great, i actually laughed out loud which i hardly ever do
someoneskiki chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
ROFLMFAO! That was sexy...and friggin hilarious. Pure awesomeness. Go you.
sandmanstwilight chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
ok I liked it...Now I get the story name...lol

Very cute...Is this the end?
Atlaxxxx chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
I would definintly like to see the piano one xD That one sounds very interesting xD And the stair case. You should seriously add those on here xD Keep Writing!

~TwilightBorn~
twin of a twin chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
GREAT!
shoecraz chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
lol! great job!
MaluTara chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
that was so much fun to read!

i LOVE dirty Edward! jaja

thanks Alice for the help!

but now i think Bella has awaking a monster...in a GOOD way!

i really LOVE it, so is going to favorites!

hope to read more fics from u!

Malu D.
Punk And Lovin It chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
LOL i loved it so kinky hehehehehheehheheheh GREAT JOB
inatowncalledforks chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Keep going, that was fun!
Cullen0128 chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
wow that was really hot. Update again soon
Roseatron chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Wonderful!
ren-san chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Well done!
bellasblush chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Great story!
HopelessRomantic79 chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
:-D Edward letting loose is SEXY! I love just the idea of all of them having kinky sex on the table. ;-)
Nessie21 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Great plot, love it.
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