Reviews for Fatal Flaws
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
I liked it I kind of wish that it gave names for the people but that is just me.
SandstormWarriors4ever chapter 1 . 7/9
uuummmm this was good but who was the first person?
PRIDEASHLEY chapter 1 . 7/1
SkratchR chapter 1 . 5/25
Question, who is the first person? I can't seem to understand. Is it Thalia? She never looked insecure to me...
PinkRaindrop chapter 1 . 4/29
make more chaps!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22
Who the heck is the first?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31
this is nice. well written
Drillbee Automaton chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
This story was amazing! The first was a bit confusing but I'm pretty sure it's Leo? Either way, I really loved it :)
Keep up your awesomeness!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Who was the first person?
Great job! ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Really good! You captured the essences of the demigods perfectly. Though is that first one Thalia or who?
BlackGryphon101 chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Love the story though I can't figure out who the first is.
Agent-014 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
OMG! I'm the only one that thought about Leo in the first one, I mean... Gods! I don't know, he was just perfect for that one... I loved the one about Nico as well...
Babiwasabi chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Who was the first one on?
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This is great! But who is the first one?
doe-eyed llama chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
I liked this, I liked it a lot. My favorite one would have to be Percy's and Nico's. I love how you ended them. But, who exactly is the first one? Is it Grover? But then the part about cabin mates screws it up for me :/
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